|Reviews for A Thousand Pains|
| Nedward chapter 3 . 2/11/2013
I'm afraid to continue.
| BELAVERA chapter 6 . 12/21/2012
Poor Edward! They buried Bella in the meadow? Poor Bella.
| BrokenYetDreaming chapter 24 . 2/23/2012
i gotta admit this was my first and olny EDWARD/BELLA fanfic that ill ever .also your sequel ill read it!cheerios (:
| Shadohart chapter 11 . 8/20/2010
I like th personal jell that E has mired himself in and the way you reveal the past. It's all very believable. My only issue is that things have not changed. A thousand years is a long time for buildings to stand. The school would not be the same. If they even still needed the building that is. High school will not be the same in a hundred years much less a thousand. Already we are seeing the rise of virtual schools and technology will be miles from what we now use. Think embedded tech.
Anyway. Those are the only hitches in your story as far as I'm concerned. The rest, your premise and your style, is great.
| ageise02 chapter 20 . 6/21/2010
could the dress that turned red have been her wedding dress? ... somehow someone got to her on the wedding day?
| ageise02 chapter 19 . 6/21/2010
Is she dreaming of Bella's death?
| ageise02 chapter 16 . 6/21/2010
one question keeps going through my head ... How did Asheni's mom know Bella's Lullaby?
Great chapter again!
| ageise02 chapter 14 . 6/21/2010
Edward told Asheni the story of the past up til the attack ...then says that Bella didn't die?
| ageise02 chapter 12 . 6/21/2010
just after starting this chapter I had a thought ... maybe if the beings inside of her house were the Volturri ... maybe they didn't really kill her but have had Bella prisoner all these centuries ... but at the end of reading this chapter I am back to thinking that Asheni is Bella reincarnated maybe
| ageise02 chapter 11 . 6/21/2010
I still don't understand how Bella is coming back or is Asheni her reincarnation and will somehow remember her past life?
Love the story even though it has me in tears - especially the piano part
| ageise02 chapter 5 . 6/21/2010
How could she look just like Bella? Her only family was Charlie and Renee/Phil. We know that there was no offspring other than Bella to carry the exact combination DNA possibility. She didn't pass it on and Charlie/Renee didn't have another child to create the DNA mix again.
| ageise02 chapter 3 . 6/21/2010
this story already has me hooked! I am DYING to know how she died and how she will come back?
| CorBen chapter 12 . 2/16/2010
This chapter made me cry. You are an amazing writer. This story is boldly original and so affecting. I love it
| Eyes of Topaz chapter 24 . 8/30/2009
This was an absolutely beautiful story and I can't wait to read the sequel...next on my list!
| Breath-of-twilight chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
k...so I shed a few tears...I can admit it...I'm a sap ..what can I say!