Reviews for Deus Ex Machina
Bored321 chapter 1 . 2/6
Oh, and the story could've done without the mention that Naruto lost control over his bodily functions. While it illustrates he's terrified, reading about it's just gross. There's a reason a lot people to point what happens when people die: It's disgusting.
Bored321 chapter 1 . 2/6
Very deep. Difficult to understand.
Bus chapter 1 . 11/4/2015
Grr... I read it only to be let down. Why?!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/16/2015
So, this is the start of a series that makes a new chapter once every seven years?
Madame Minuit12 chapter 1 . 5/19/2015
wow different way to do timetravel and I really like that it's a genetic virus which is a threat. great story and I'd love to see how it goes from here!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/22/2015
Never to be continued. For shame
Yakumo the Wu chapter 1 . 1/12/2015
It's a shame you never continued/finished this story; this story is quite strong, has a unique time travel plot, and makes me want more! Would've loved to see how Naruto managed to convince Tsunade...
melonacotton chapter 1 . 9/16/2014
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Damn. Update soon, please.
Manillalu chapter 1 . 4/10/2014
O my gosh. That didn't go anywhere, but the imagery, development and symbolism was powerful. Beautiful and potent, I only regret not seeing more of this plot come to fruition.
Winter's Folly chapter 1 . 3/23/2014
Wow. I would say I am speechless, as everyone who didn't review is, but as that isn't true since I am reviewing. I do know that I am at a loss to say anything important, but I always am.
latelydreaming chapter 1 . 2/2/2014
I'm gonna go ahead and review, just in case you are still alive, have not dropped this fic, and have not updated only because you think a seven year wait for a chapter heightens suspense. So without further ado...
THIS. IS. AMAZING. It's left me kind of speechless, which is pretty impressive, considering I am female and therefore always have an opinion to share. It's a take on Naruto!time travel that I've never seen or even thought of before. Though the whole virus-apocalypse thing has been done repeatedly in the past, it's never (to my knowledge) been done in the Narutoverse, especially not believably. Yet this was both believable and incredibly well-written. Honestly, the way this first chapter ended feels complete as is... For example, I'd LOVE to see more, but you could just mark it complete and I wouldn't feel like the story was ended prematurely. However, you didn't and your note at the end seemed to imply a definite plan for the future of this fic, so I'm begging you: PLEASE FINISH THIS! PLEASE! A seven year wait is fine! A twenty year wait is fine! Just please, PLEASE don't give up on this!
So, yeah. That's all.
Dnar Semaj chapter 1 . 2/1/2014
This has no chance of updating and because of that I'm sad.

This is fantastic.
Loner Kid chapter 1 . 1/9/2014
Plzzzzz update! I love your style of writing...plzzzz update!
Elelith chapter 1 . 12/29/2013
Interesting start... Can't wait for more...
Duesal Bladesinger chapter 1 . 11/4/2013
This is absolutely incredible. Wonderful job.
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