Reviews for Deus Ex Machina
Indra Sparrow chapter 1 . 2/6
An amazing introduction, it gives enough information to get people to continue reading, but not enough to show how the plot could and possibly would end. I can't wait to read more.
MaxTF chapter 1 . 4/23/2017
Oh yeah, its totally going to have multiple chapters. ITS NOT LIKE ITS BEEN 10 YEARS OR ANYTHING
sorry the only reason i'm miffed is that it is a good fic and i would like to have seen what happens next
Guest chapter 1 . 9/30/2016
God this fic was sooo awesome! I'm so sad it's dead. Then again maybe it's better that way. Too many authors incorporate fourth war arc revelations and characters and rediculous plot twists, into fics that were otherwise a shining example of the Naruto golden age. Meh, anyway, this fic was amazing despite being majorly unfinished. Thanks for posting, and I hope life's treating u well, and that you're still out there, even if ur not on -
tanithlipsky chapter 1 . 8/31/2016
very good
Bored321 chapter 1 . 2/6/2016
Oh, and the story could've done without the mention that Naruto lost control over his bodily functions. While it illustrates he's terrified, reading about it's just gross. There's a reason a lot people to point what happens when people die: It's disgusting.
Bored321 chapter 1 . 2/6/2016
Very deep. Difficult to understand.
Bus chapter 1 . 11/4/2015
Grr... I read it only to be let down. Why?!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/16/2015
So, this is the start of a series that makes a new chapter once every seven years?
Madame Minuit12 chapter 1 . 5/19/2015
wow different way to do timetravel and I really like that it's a genetic virus which is a threat. great story and I'd love to see how it goes from here!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/22/2015
Never to be continued. For shame
Yakumo the Wu chapter 1 . 1/12/2015
It's a shame you never continued/finished this story; this story is quite strong, has a unique time travel plot, and makes me want more! Would've loved to see how Naruto managed to convince Tsunade...
starlineshine chapter 1 . 9/16/2014
Damn. Update soon, please.
Manillalu chapter 1 . 4/10/2014
O my gosh. That didn't go anywhere, but the imagery, development and symbolism was powerful. Beautiful and potent, I only regret not seeing more of this plot come to fruition.
Winter's Folly - Summer's Vice chapter 1 . 3/23/2014
Wow. I would say I am speechless, as everyone who didn't review is, but as that isn't true since I am reviewing. I do know that I am at a loss to say anything important, but I always am.
latelydreaming chapter 1 . 2/2/2014
I'm gonna go ahead and review, just in case you are still alive, have not dropped this fic, and have not updated only because you think a seven year wait for a chapter heightens suspense. So without further ado...
THIS. IS. AMAZING. It's left me kind of speechless, which is pretty impressive, considering I am female and therefore always have an opinion to share. It's a take on Naruto!time travel that I've never seen or even thought of before. Though the whole virus-apocalypse thing has been done repeatedly in the past, it's never (to my knowledge) been done in the Narutoverse, especially not believably. Yet this was both believable and incredibly well-written. Honestly, the way this first chapter ended feels complete as is... For example, I'd LOVE to see more, but you could just mark it complete and I wouldn't feel like the story was ended prematurely. However, you didn't and your note at the end seemed to imply a definite plan for the future of this fic, so I'm begging you: PLEASE FINISH THIS! PLEASE! A seven year wait is fine! A twenty year wait is fine! Just please, PLEASE don't give up on this!
So, yeah. That's all.
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