Reviews for Pretend
Eurisse chapter 1 . 7/2/2014
aw... how can you do this to my heart T.T Absolutely heartbreaking.. the intro and the ending were in rhythm and I couldn't ask for a better way of expressing Renge's feelings. I hope you'll continue writing for this pair :)
ficklejam chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
Wow, gorgeous writing! I loved it.
Listen To The Dots chapter 1 . 9/6/2011
D: That was so sad... This leaves so many options available! I always thought of Renge as a support character... *.*;;;;
Lena xo chapter 1 . 5/27/2011
It actually took me a moment to place the changes Oo

Strangely haunting, and very sad... poor Renge...


Lena xo
darkzenith324 chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
Wow, that was intense, and rather profound. I actually would like a positive Renge & Kyouya fanfiction, but this one was really good, and definitely a realistic possibility. That is to say, it plays on the emotions and characters of Renge and Kyouya from the anime quite well. Awesome, thanks for the post!
Xena Jaid chapter 1 . 6/28/2009
OMG This is so sad it almost made me cry. I feel really bad for Renge because she is always happy so I know that someone who is always happy can't take sadness very well. Some part reminded me of Kyoya but I don't think he would do all of that to her because he doesn't gain anything from it but despite that I loved it.
ShyDaniChan chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
damn poor renge..great piece of work very moving you are gifted.
Clashing Harmony chapter 1 . 5/7/2009
Pretty nice. You should work on Kyouya's characterization, though. He certainly isn't the type to kiss someone roughly, or by force. He's the perfect, refined type...almost artificial. Though I believe the rest of it. "And he makes leaving her look easy." Yep, just like him!
ignis'caereleus chapter 1 . 4/21/2009
Beautiful, I... don't know how to say it. It's so sad when our fary tales come to ashes. But it's a grate story. Love it.
AlinaLotus chapter 1 . 2/25/2009
I really liked this. Renge is a great character, and I like the depth you've given her. Definitely a fav of mine. Thanks for sharing!
308256438025 chapter 1 . 2/17/2009

I know! He's such a jerk but so hot

Still a jerk!
Miriae chapter 1 . 12/23/2008
this is such a sad yet beautiful story... -sniff- poor renge...

good job on this...
Bluementrit chapter 1 . 9/29/2008
So sad

anyways please make a sequel...

It's so great
mickey kity chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
You should change the rating, this was not a M story. It was good but not for a M.
Demeter1 chapter 1 . 2/4/2008
That actually made me cry, a little. It's really silly, but I couldn't help but see someone I knew in it. I felt my heart sink little by little as the story continued, but I was so, so, so glad she told him to leave in the end. Lovely story.
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