Reviews for Pretend
0anhonestpuck0 chapter 1 . 9/14
I'd always imagined a kind of relationship like this between Renge and Kyoya. As much I love him (Haru/Kyo being my fav ship in Ouran), I can see a cold, cruel, ans manipulative Kyoya using Renge as an outlet for the emotions he doesn't know what do with. And sweet little Renge, under the bossy exterior, willingly goes along with it, because she wants to believe, she wants it to be true.

I love the way you handled this.
Eurisse chapter 1 . 7/2/2014
aw... how can you do this to my heart T.T Absolutely heartbreaking.. the intro and the ending were in rhythm and I couldn't ask for a better way of expressing Renge's feelings. I hope you'll continue writing for this pair :)
ficklejam chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
Wow, gorgeous writing! I loved it.
Listen To The Dots chapter 1 . 9/6/2011
D: That was so sad... This leaves so many options available! I always thought of Renge as a support character... *.*;;;;
Lena xo chapter 1 . 5/27/2011
It actually took me a moment to place the changes Oo

Strangely haunting, and very sad... poor Renge...


Lena xo
darkzenith324 chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
Wow, that was intense, and rather profound. I actually would like a positive Renge & Kyouya fanfiction, but this one was really good, and definitely a realistic possibility. That is to say, it plays on the emotions and characters of Renge and Kyouya from the anime quite well. Awesome, thanks for the post!
Xena Jaid chapter 1 . 6/28/2009
OMG This is so sad it almost made me cry. I feel really bad for Renge because she is always happy so I know that someone who is always happy can't take sadness very well. Some part reminded me of Kyoya but I don't think he would do all of that to her because he doesn't gain anything from it but despite that I loved it.
ShyDaniChan chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
damn poor renge..great piece of work very moving you are gifted.
Clashing Harmony chapter 1 . 5/7/2009
Pretty nice. You should work on Kyouya's characterization, though. He certainly isn't the type to kiss someone roughly, or by force. He's the perfect, refined type...almost artificial. Though I believe the rest of it. "And he makes leaving her look easy." Yep, just like him!
ignis'caereleus chapter 1 . 4/21/2009
Beautiful, I... don't know how to say it. It's so sad when our fary tales come to ashes. But it's a grate story. Love it.
AlinaLotus chapter 1 . 2/25/2009
I really liked this. Renge is a great character, and I like the depth you've given her. Definitely a fav of mine. Thanks for sharing!
308256438025 chapter 1 . 2/17/2009

I know! He's such a jerk but so hot

Still a jerk!
Miriae chapter 1 . 12/23/2008
this is such a sad yet beautiful story... -sniff- poor renge...

good job on this...
Bluementrit chapter 1 . 9/29/2008
So sad

anyways please make a sequel...

It's so great
mickey kity chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
You should change the rating, this was not a M story. It was good but not for a M.
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