Reviews for Attrition
wind dancer1981 chapter 1 . 2/9/2007
touchy I wish it was longer
snowdragon chapter 1 . 2/9/2007
Wow. This was a very well-done look into Duo's psyche. And, yeah, the look in the eyes of someone who has been through war is very noticeable...very deep. I really enjoyed your story, short as it was...it was a nice character study. Pretty cool. Of course, now I'll have to go see what else you've written...
Halcyone chapter 1 . 2/9/2007
Really good, especially the last paragraph with the good days/ bad days comparison. That last sentence was just perfect! I was just kinda reading along and then finished the last paragraph then hopped down to that last little sentance, read it and thought: Whoa, nice set up. Really enjoyed it and you conveyed a lot with just a little.