|Reviews for The Lie I've Lived|
| jurmaev chapter 24 . 8/9
I loved the Sorting Hat in this story. Thank you!
| reberebecca chapter 5 . 7/17
Una storia super originale. Non ho mai letto una storia I’m cui Harry abbia i ricordi di suo padre ne una cosa vicino.
Il cappello parlante uno spasso! Anche se è un po’ estremo. Un po’ alla “comicità di jim carrey“ passami il paragone. In cui è carino e divertente ma alla lunga, questa sua esagerazione stanca parecchio. Anche il fatto di flirtare con tutte come un allupato soprattutto con la sua fangirl dodicenne dopo aver fatto tutti qui bei discorsi in cui da bravo adolescente si vuole godere la vita senza complicazioni. Ecco! Alla faccia di non volersi complicare.
Del resto non vedo l’ora di leggere di più e vedere i sviluppi.
| Holios the Demon Companion chapter 18 . 7/12
Ah yes the potter family motto: "This will hurt quite a bit. Prepare yourself"
"Hoc satis aliquantulus nocebit. para te"
| Now Account chapter 24 . 6/22
This is incredible! The interpretation of Harry James was well thought out and very entertaining.
I'm going to check out Bungle in the Jungle once more, even though I originally didn't like it when I started it once.
| lastgodofwar chapter 5 . 6/7
Okay this is the like 5th time i've tried to read this. Here is why i cant get through it. I would like to blame it all on the sorting hat but i cant. to tell the truth every character is slowly becoming unlikeable you always need someone to root for or commiserate with in a story. Some emotional connection. But slowly i'm starting to hate everyone. the hat is obvious its not just that its rude and a giant asshole. Its that its not even funny when its a rude asshole. Humor can redeem a lot of sins but the hat isn't even funny so its JUST an asshole. it reminds me of those Gods in percy jackson they torture heros as a TEST and if they die or worse its fine they are just mortals. Then there is harry and everyone else. The "pranks" they play are shit. They aren't funny they aren't fun they are just messed up. Slowly the moral compass of the entire cast of characters is broken. Ginny is already messed up in the head from a cursed object. So lets have the person she's in love with kiss her and confuse her more. Then there is the part where we have a MC who is in an identity crisis never had less fun with that. This story takes all the people but one and turns them into people you question whether you want to cheer for them. the only one i like so far is Arthur weasley. Despite having the memory of his father harry is about as childish as all the other people. Arthur is someone i could actually like hearing about and he is so a side character it isn't even funny.
| Stormshadow13 chapter 24 . 6/6
| DiabolicGod chapter 24 . 6/3
It's a pity there haven't been a couple of chapters to at least bring closure to this story, since I consider it pretty bad style to just put a story on complete without actually finishing it or posting the first chapter of the sequel if you do write one. The ending here is barely satisfactory for the first part and unfortunately inadequate for a whole story.
That said, while I am no fan of the way magic has been written here and did not really like the fights (though they seem close to realistic in the setting Rowling introduced us to), it is a rather good unfinished fanfiction. Perhaps you will return to fanfictions in the future, one can hope.
| varenyamishra2511 chapter 15 . 5/30
I just wanted one of them to just use a bazooka vacuum cleaner fire extinguisher and a silica ball rifle to deal with the room
| omh666 chapter 23 . 5/28
Now that, that is an inssult. Holy damn!
| omh666 chapter 22 . 5/28
That's quite an interesting concept, on the broom ride. Hmm.
| omh666 chapter 21 . 5/28
Potter luck strikes again! Defending himself, and Harry manages to take out the ship. Hahahaa.
| omh666 chapter 20 . 5/28
I keep thinking it, but not saying it in a review because you've proven time and time again that you're too good an author to be tarred with the same brush as most others on . That said, I really, truly, dearly, love how you change your characters between stories. In this story, Harry and Fleur are together, Bill is a jerk, and so on. In Bungle in the Jungle, Fleur and Bill are together, and Bill is Harry's best/only? friend. Completely different directions, but you give each depth and solidity. Thank you for the awesome read.
| omh666 chapter 19 . 5/27
I see a lot of similarity between this chapter's rhino and the chapter of Bungle in the Jungle, or the following story in that series, where Bill and Harry use the demon bone to smash their way through the mountain of traps and wards.
| omh666 chapter 18 . 5/27
That ending was rough. Just... ouch. I'm hoping he brought back Frank personally.
| omh666 chapter 17 . 5/27
The medical bit in this chapter was really interesting. I did like the dark twisted for healing concept. It reminds me of just how much of our medical knowledge comes from the horrific things done during the holocaust.