Reviews for The Lie I've Lived |
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Killer-Squillers-Are-Coming chapter 3 . 4/16/2007 love the darkness so this chapter was awesome please update soon |
Killer-Squillers-Are-Coming chapter 1 . 4/15/2007 omg love this story you have to update soon and ihave not even read the other chapters anyway love the slowly harry has amazing knowlage thing. |
storm tigeress chapter 3 . 4/12/2007 this is an interesting start to your story. please update soon |
Maxennce chapter 3 . 4/12/2007 fucking hilarious story. Absolutely crackers. Definitely haven't seen a side of the hat quite like that. Keep up the great work, hope you continue with this story cause it has real character, definitely haven't seen a plot quite like this before Cheers max |
Kpjam chapter 3 . 4/10/2007 I likes! You definitely have a flair for stretching characterizations and filling in color for those actions and personalities completely ignored in canon. I love the hat! And the hat's comment about how Lily likes it is priceless. I can't see Lily sleeping with Lupin, more like, I have problems with Lupin sleeping with Lily. But then again, a lot can have happened in the 12 - 13 years, remorse can be a powerful factor in shaping people. I can't compare it to your others because this isn't as fleshed out, yet, but i'm looking forward to see where you take this. And Harry should have followed up with Katie, there needs be more Katie stories! Or at least some Katie actions! Go man-whore Harry! |
amusewithaview chapter 1 . 4/6/2007 I really like the way you write Harry/James and I found the plot to be interesting. But the hat completely put me off your story. That much profanity from one character isn't funny, it's just plain obnoxious. Overall it's an interesting concept, and very well written. Just not my personal cup of tea. So, since you asked: NO I really really DO NOT like the Hat, at ALL. Gracias, and good luck with your fic. |
drdeth2000 chapter 3 . 4/5/2007 good start, i look forward to the next chapter |
riegert8 chapter 3 . 4/1/2007 I know I made a review for this chapter at fanfic authors, but I don't think that I did a good job at it. I do think that this is a good story expect for some parts. It good that Harry is seeing some of his fathers memmory's, like most things you have take the good with the bad. It sad that Lupin betrayed his friend by sleeping with Lily, James and Lupin must not have been that close if he would do this to him. I can see that Harry would confront Lupin over this because he can't ask his mother why she did this, I don't see that Harry and Lupin being close for the reason is that if Lupin could stab his best friend in the back. What would he do to others, what would Sirius would have thought if she knew. It sad that Lily cheated on her husband, does she feel bad that happen. I would say no because she blamed everyone but herself, I doubt that it was the stress or the pressure of what is going on even with the prophecy. The war been going on for 11 years and 4 years before she went to Hogswart, she would knew that she was close to kill list because she a muggleborn witch and James is because he is bloodtraitor. They woould been a target with or with out the prophecy. You have to feel bad for James he went after Lilly and it take almost 6 years to become friends, not long after they leave school they get married and have there only child she cheated on him with one of his best friends. He want to leave her but is talk into going with them into hiding by the Longbottom's, what must have hurt the most is that Lily won't take responsibility for her own actions. In myoption if Voldemort went after the Longbottom's first that James and Lilly marriaged was over, for an couple of reason's. 1) Lilly is acting like she not at fault, unless she was raped she deserve half of the blame 2)Can you really trust someone that cheat on you and there said that they love you. I know an few people that have cheated on their love one and they say it hard the first time, it more easy the second time around. I have to admit I don't like the part that Lilly cheated on James, I never have read any James and Lily storys that show that James has cheated and If I did I would have stop reading. There is not an lot known about James & Lilly to know what type people they were, but if Harry, Ron, Hermione or Ginny cheated would make more likly. I never read a story where Harry cheated on his girlfriend or wife, I have read story's where Ginny or Hermione cheated on Harry and I read story's is that Hermione cheated on Ron with Harry. My problem with those is that Harry forgave Hermione or Ginny so easy, you look at Ron that you don't forgave that easy sometimes it takes years. I will always dump a story if I think it becoming too stupid, It have not reach that point yet. You are one of my favorite authors but there is no rule that I have agree with everything that you do. My mistake with the review from fansfic authors is that I did review the story as much as saying I did not like a part in it,plus that I did explain my points out good enough because I wanted to leave short |
Rei chapter 3 . 4/1/2007 So ROCK! |
Silo666 chapter 3 . 3/31/2007 hey update i liek it so fare i think it is funny now lets get the veela in there so he can get a fot girl |
skooly chapter 3 . 3/30/2007 NICE! once agine you have manneged to perduce a piece of literary genius, what is this dark magic that allows to come up with such good ideas! anywho i am looking forward to the next chapters |
gamdori-bil chapter 3 . 3/28/2007 I have to say this is a great story and I'm really looking forward to more. Its an odd yet very realistic take on the Potter Universe. Thanks for writing! |
marie1 chapter 3 . 3/27/2007 looking forward to more, it was good |
PhoenixMage chapter 3 . 3/26/2007 This is so interesting! I love the story concept. |
Luc chapter 3 . 3/26/2007 This cursing hat seems odd. Very off canon. Why is the hat changed so much? I can't understand Harry or is he James? Feels unfair that he has to ask that from himself. And yeah, there should be reality in the story but was it truly necessary to make Lily cheat on James with Remus? Where's the happiness? Shoo, perhaps I'm just not in angst mood but I feel this is too focused on the depressing reality stuff to be a good adventure fic.. or romance, whenever that comes. |