Reviews for The Lie I've Lived
AegisX-TAIL chapter 3 . 3/22/2007
good chap.

was wondering when the update would come...

but it was a good one...

so keep up the good work...

Adios for now..

and hope you update soon.. D
jon02 chapter 3 . 3/22/2007
always look forward to reading your work. great job
japanese-jew chapter 3 . 3/22/2007
It definitely feels like you're getting the hang of first person. I would've preferred an acknowledgment from the hat at Harry's foul mouth, but it was still pulled off quite nicely. I suppose that Lily's unfaithfulness will serve to allow Harry to get past whiny "oh noes my wife is dead" stage, but it seems pointless considering that he's also in "oh noes all of the ladies are around ten years my junior" mode. How complicated.

Pretty solid work,

JJ
gadriam chapter 3 . 3/22/2007
This is certainly one of the most peculiar stories i've ever read. You do this Mindmeld thing like you did the Bungle Animagics. Not according to form 1a.

It'll be fun to see his next meeting with Remus, and if he ever meets Cho's aunt i hope he mentions finding his father's Black Book, and that James said nice and interesting things about her. The implementation of that customized summoner is another thing to look forward to.

So, will you make him ambidextrous or ambisinister? Will he aquire James' social skills? Get himself a few notches, perhaps? Learn the most offensive vocabulary known to man and haberdashery? Pro primo though, will he remember J's schoolwork and duelling skills, and will this knowledge be integrated or just..accessed?

Poor HJ.

I love this!

g
Potterfreak52390 chapter 3 . 3/22/2007
I think that it's nice not to see Lily and James as this couple comparable to a bunch of saints. I would have to say that it is a breath of fresh air and I hope you continue down that path. Please keep up the good work and update soon!
Atropal the Defiler chapter 3 . 3/22/2007
Awesome story! Keep it up...
FohkuKohgeki chapter 3 . 3/22/2007
Great stuff.
PapaMidNite chapter 3 . 3/22/2007
Good chapter
NATWEST chapter 3 . 3/22/2007
I see that james is in there but he has to have a Harry also, Harry is the more stable one don't make hj a asshole it will lose appeal
Lang chapter 1 . 3/22/2007
Hey jbern,

I always enjoy what you write. This story is no different. I hope it turns out nice and long D

A Harry/James personality is definitely a new idea. Or atleast an idea I haven't seen and you've done wonders with it. I think this is how Harry would be if he'd still had his real parents.

Keep it up!
NATWEST chapter 2 . 3/22/2007
I had to clean my screen I laughed so hard though Sorting Hat Sceens I could not contain it. I love it. Just Raw emotions of dislike. And the Part when Petunia said, HARRY had this Tourette's syndrome. I sometimes want to just yell curse words at certain people and then say,'I sorry, I fogort to take my medince I have Tourette's and I was saying this swear. I know it's wrong be hell.I love your story
coriel chapter 3 . 3/22/2007
awesome chapter! PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!
sirius009 chapter 3 . 3/22/2007
jim i leave for three days and you have a new chapter? I like it, one of the most enjoyable reads out there, and the hat is even a better oc than kwan, keep it up.
bumble101 chapter 3 . 3/22/2007
i really enjoyed this chapter as we got to see HJ deal with the surfacing memories,the revelations they bring i.e the prophecy ang how they are changing his perspective. i am anxiously awaiting your next update and what revelations about HJ's life it will bring.

Thanks

Bumble
inecatus chapter 3 . 3/22/2007
That was awesome. I love how you went agianst the mold and made their marraige not seem perfect but you didn't go too far and say something stupid like Lily was giving herself love potions. I especially loved the hats comment on Doggy style and you use of the Oedipus Simplex instead of saying Complex even though this memory thing sounds more complex than the Simplex.
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