Reviews for The Lie I've Lived
Arden Ranger chapter 1 . 2/9/2007
What an interesting premise! I like it very much, and look forward to where this will go.
Squeegy01 chapter 1 . 2/9/2007
i really enjoyed the first chapter. And I can't wait to see what's next.
scarletalphabet chapter 1 . 2/9/2007
Very intriguing. I must admit I am very curious to see where this is going. I quite like this Harry.
Tama Saga chapter 1 . 2/9/2007
Very entertaining read.
highbrass chapter 1 . 2/9/2007
Oh yea, I like this fic. Great 1st person. Keep it up.
jon02 chapter 1 . 2/9/2007
great to see a new story from you! awesome idea, and will give me another great story to read. Cheers!
Tilius chapter 1 . 2/9/2007
Interesting start.
dfDFFtyUjytjYTKyuKYk chapter 1 . 2/9/2007
Haha, awesome and unique. Keep it up!
AFanWhoFeelsThings chapter 1 . 2/9/2007
Hi there, I left you a review on DLP as well, but I thought I'd be the first here.

I really like this. I love the idea behind it (that Harry has his father's memories) and I love the way you are sprinkling little layers of James throughout Harry's every day activities. The Quidditch drill was my favorite part of this chapter-the detail you used there was excellent. You know I am a sucker for details.

Kind of a short chapter, which irks me just because I didn't find the momentum had reached a satisfactory place yet but I'll just have to wait for more until the next update, eh?

Good work, Jim. ] (sh...I'm no Tinn Tam)
ranma hibiki chapter 1 . 2/9/2007
bum bum bum! is harry possesed! is he going crazy! will he leave school to joing the pro quidditch league! why am i ignoring the summary!

good prologue. but im worried about later chapters
blackshadow1006 chapter 1 . 2/9/2007
nice can't wait for the next chapter
fhippogriff chapter 1 . 2/9/2007
Well, I never read first chapters when they first come out, but for you, an exception.

I was curious whether it would "sound" like the other two. I guess a change to first person makes so much change that it's hard to really judge the sound. But I'll try anyway. This story reminded me of the narration in Dragnet (the TV show). I saw one on TVland once. It's a little more sarcastic than Dragnet, maybe Archie Goodwin in the Nero Wolfe books. And if you know the Nero Wolfe books I'd be amazed.

Bungle's sounds like teenagers talking.

Fight sounds like a bunch of adults talking, adults that didn't grow up together, and are discussing something not very personal. Ah well, I can't get it any better than that.

Anyway, interesting storyline here. I'll be interested to see your reason of why he's chanelling James after finding Sirius.
Potter Abducted by Penguins chapter 1 . 2/9/2007
I like it! Hope to read more of this soon.
gadriam chapter 1 . 2/9/2007
*sob* I don't feel unique anymore.

Nevermind.

This was a great opening act to a story with all the makings of a mindblower. I was able to figure stuff out well enough for a good guess as to what's going on, and i'm really looking forward to the rest.

“'Yes, and dreaming as well.' There let her figure that out."

Hermy as a dreamgirl? By you? Mindboggling.

I believe i know where you're taking this one, but i don't care too much. You haven't done what i expected more than twice in all your chapters.

Come on! Knock me out again!

g
DobbyElfLord chapter 1 . 2/9/2007
Hey, I get to be first!

I really like your concept in this story. Harry does sound a bit "harder" then normal but that would make sense given the idea James is blended into him.

I look forward to seeing where you go with this!

Rick
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