Reviews for The Lie I've Lived
Vetus Animus chapter 1 . 2/13/2007
Ineresting. Very interesting. I didn't pick up on any mistakes but w/e. Hope u update one of your brilliant stories son. Just wish i could get mine off the ground.
hattuteline chapter 1 . 2/13/2007
It's a good setting, and written well - making it an interesting start. I think you could just make this a more or less Super-Harry fic to 'balance' the two struggling stories you're writing. A more light-hearted approach to the training etc. Obviously when written well, any plotline would be good. :p
AegisX-TAIL chapter 1 . 2/12/2007
ohss... good fic so far...

hope you update soon...

Adios for now... D
The Boss chapter 1 . 2/12/2007
The story shows merit. It actullay looks pretty good. I must ask, however, that you finish the fic.
craziest1 chapter 1 . 2/12/2007
First off, you spelled 'Moony' as 'Mooney', but other than that, and the complete lack of backstory, I liked it.
Schwinpt chapter 1 . 2/12/2007
you know jbern...Bungle in the Jungle is my favorite by far, but this story is already a strong candidate to be number 1! keep up with the good work that you always do and i hope you update this one and the other two soon!

PS: this story is already in my Favorite Stories list!
Darthme1011 chapter 1 . 2/12/2007
awesome i cant wait for more
TheEveningStar chapter 1 . 2/12/2007
Wow - great start! I can't wait to hear the explanation for what's going on, and how James seems to occasionally take over Harry's personality. Keep going!
bmr1024 chapter 1 . 2/12/2007
Pretty good story so far. Look forward to reading more. Hope adding 1 more doesnt delay the updates on your other stories though.
10dedfish chapter 1 . 2/12/2007
Good start to a new story. If its anything like your other two, I will follow along until finished. I noticed nothing glaring mistake or typo wise, so I wouldnt worry about the beta yet.

10ded
Tillantria chapter 1 . 2/11/2007
Nice start! I really think you have something here... I cannot wait to see what else you cook up here.
jabarber69 chapter 1 . 2/11/2007
Interesting ideal, but I gather from your summary that somehow when voldie threw his curse at little Harry he somehow also got some of his father soul? or maybe his mum or possible both! otherwise where did the runes info come from?
obsesivegamer chapter 1 . 2/11/2007
original as always and very good, i can't say how intresting this is compared to the other new storiesright now.
LadyOfTheGreyDawn chapter 1 . 2/11/2007
Wow! This looks awesome! Please write more! I think Harry should keep 'his' memories a seceret. Please update soon.
Knives chapter 1 . 2/11/2007
Interesting. It's "Moony" though, not "Mooney". Looking forward to more!
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