This was a very interesting chapter, but will there be more? It is VERY incomplete.

I really like this new story you're working on. I can barely see the small hints you have left as to the plot of the story, but I'm not confident enough yet to try to guess exactly where you are going with this.

In this chapter you have given enough hints to the plot so that you can catch the reader's attention, but you've not given enough away to let the reader loose interest because he can guess everything you've planned out. I really liked it.

In the beginning of the chapter I was really confused as to where you were going with the story and the summary didn't really help a lot. I figured I'd give the story a chance seeing as your other stories are so brilliant, and I don't regret it. You've opened up for many intrigueing possibilities and I can barely wait to read how you plan to pull this off.

You've really got me hooked on this story now and I wait in anticipation for the next chapter. Keep up the great work!

Very nice. Don't think I have come across a fic like this. Looking forward to more.

Very nice. Good to see another good story from ya. See you at DLP.

Excellent fun with a lovely dollop of dry humour. I am most keen to read the rest, as this cheered me up at a time I really needed it.

Nice as hell. Who's the other author in your contest? I'd love too read his story too.

Well, I guess I'll check it out on dlp.

Great start to a story, and I think you're doing a very good job of using first person. I really liked the Quidditch scene and thought you did a great job of describing the action. It's very interesting to see the James traits appearing and I can't wait to read more. As always, thank you for sharing this with the rest of us.

It's great, mate - I'm looking forward to seeing more of it.

good story so far but i don't see what you did there unless he's getting memory's from either his parents, voldy or all three or is it something different altogether. either way will love to see the next chapter.

It looks like another great fic at making!

I'm hook. Good cliffy placementand for more.

hehe this seems pretty cool did some of harry minds die and some of james's mind fuse with his making him a lot harry/james combination dude? either way i cant wait to see what happens in the tourney

Great job, hopefully you'll update soon.

For future chapters, definitely proofread, possibly by reading it out loud. I noticed when you wrote "Absently, I stuck my wand in my mouth and mutter, “integrum restituere.”" which would have been quite easily picked up with 15 minutes of effort. You're on your own now, Mr. Jbern!

good start, hope you can keep it up