Reviews for Transience
Motherof8 chapter 1 . 12/4/2013
Nice story so far
Guest chapter 11 . 10/20/2013
"Kneeling on my knee". Nice wording smartass. He story is good, I just don't think you have the whole concept of vampires down. Work on that, or right human. Ps I don't think they shower..
blb1000 chapter 13 . 9/1/2013
blb1000 chapter 12 . 9/1/2013
Pretty unlike B to be excited about planning the wedding.
blb1000 chapter 11 . 9/1/2013
Good timing on the proposal.
blb1000 chapter 9 . 9/1/2013
I want to know why he left her in the woods to change alone? Thinking it might have something to do with not being able to read her mind. Did he think she was dead?
blb1000 chapter 7 . 9/1/2013
I suspected as much, but wasn't sure why he wouldn't remember that.
blb1000 chapter 5 . 9/1/2013
Does this happen in Canadian high schools... The hearts & candy? American schools might have a v-day dance, but nothing during school hours.
blb1000 chapter 4 . 9/1/2013
Sounds like they need something to hang on the doorknob when the bathroom is in use.
blb1000 chapter 3 . 9/1/2013
Thank you for using different student names!
blb1000 chapter 1 . 9/1/2013
So they've both forgotten the other and he's changed names. Wonder if they have a connection otherwise?
Motherof8 chapter 14 . 3/19/2013
Thanks for a beautiful story. I really enjoyed it
Motherof8 chapter 13 . 3/19/2013
Aww, simply great
Motherof8 chapter 3 . 3/19/2013
Enjoying this story. Thanks
Guest chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
OMG! It's so good. Edward changed her right there's no other person who would actually do that! Looooooove it!
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