|Reviews for in heat!|
| Cruell-DeVil chapter 1 . 8/10/2017
This could have been a nice story if not for all the grammatical errors.
| JR chapter 1 . 8/3/2017
Okay the material i good but CKECK THE SPELLING. the grammar is terrible, i had an extremely difficult time understanding who was talking, what was going on and how everything was fitting together
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/2/2017
Get ready for my rage(turns into superman)YOU FUCKING ASSHOLE,BITCH WHAT THE HELL IS THIS IM GOING TO KILL YOU WHEN YOU READ THIS I WILL BE IN YOUR ROOM HIDING IN THE SHADOWS YOU WILL BE IN FOR A SURPRISE OF YOUR LIFE just kidding; or am i
| Tex chapter 1 . 6/2/2017
Terrible grammar, but kick ass story. I love it.
| Julia ponymon chapter 1 . 3/5/2017
Could you at least TRY to spell things correctly?
| dpthree98 chapter 1 . 12/5/2016
| dianaxprince chapter 1 . 8/18/2016
What do you do for a living? Not this I hope, its trash (I think thats where you got it from)
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/22/2016
This is shit. I'm sorry, but if this is how you actually write then I'm pretty sure your retarded.
| Sucked chapter 1 . 6/9/2016
Poorly written, punctuated, with 0 plot line. The sex scene was horrible and made no sense.
| cat chapter 1 . 5/11/2016
| Raven Scary chapter 1 . 2/19/2016
This is so Cute. Love it.
| 22 chapter 1 . 2/13/2016
| riva chapter 1 . 2/10/2016
This WS really a very great story thank u author
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/11/2015
| None ya chapter 1 . 10/1/2015
1. Bad spelling and grammar
2. Went way too fast