|Reviews for One Breath|
| Rese1986 chapter 1 . 7/8/2007
i'm bawling like a baby. i shouldn't have read it. it said character deaths lol. but i did anyways. despite the tears flowing freely down my cheeks, this story was very good. the line emily said as she was dying..I can feel him...was so powerful
| Bedazzle Me chapter 1 . 2/18/2007
My tears say it all.. That was awesome! I just hope my mascara hasn't run lol.
| TBrennanFan chapter 1 . 2/11/2007
Hey there Oblivion,
I am totally speachless. I really shed a few tears. It was really amazing. I can not wait to read your next story! Have a great day! :P
| detective-giggles chapter 1 . 2/10/2007
OMG. You're an amazing writer! I'm crying now and I feel kind of like a nerd... :) BTW, I agree! March 30th is a long time!
| KJ4life21 chapter 1 . 2/10/2007
I loved it. It wasn't one of the cutsey live happily ever after stories it was real it is what i would imagine would happen if the person you loved more than anything else in the world was taken from u in the crulest sense. Reading this i could feel the pain she felt i have never cried reading a fanfiction or any kind of fictional story really and i cried while reading this it was great filled with emotion and heart great job.
| folgersgirl chapter 1 . 2/10/2007
I was wondering when someone would kill off Matt or Emily.
I was shocked when you did both. Very emotional.
| mariedawn2 chapter 1 . 2/10/2007
wow, you did a really good job with that. Most fanfictions, while I enjoy them, do not evoke that much emotion. That just about made me cry and would have if I didn't feel dumb crying over something not real!