|Reviews for Humane Studies|
| CJNyfalt chapter 5 . 4/19/2008
Good chapter, I'm glad that you have updated.
There are two things, however, that stick out and breaks the flow:
1. You states that Hinata was in A10, which is wrong and made me spend time trying to figure out who you had forgotten about. "Apparently, A10, the girl with white eyes, was in the Medical EA ..."
2. It ends a little abrupt with no post-interview thought about Sakura from Kire. It stands out so much when we get one after all the others.
| Zetnnik chapter 5 . 4/19/2008
Oh, wow! An update, YAY! _
Took you long enough... _ Not that I'm complaining...
(inner me) 'Yes, you are...'
No I'm not! I'm just glad that Itallia updated. :D
Excellent chapter! And long! _
Neji's and Shikamaru's are my fave on this chapter.
Loved the part about Neji's envy regarding the Naruto/Sasuke relationship.
Can't wait to read Kakashi's POV and Hinata's...
Hope to read the next chapter soon...
| Kaitachi chapter 2 . 4/9/2008
Nice job! Now for the questions:
Huh? There were questions in the first chapter? Then I'll first answer those ones and then this chap...
1) Yea, it's a well done attack... Although I don't know why he did that...
Ok now this chap's questions...
1)Yea, I found them a bit hard to understand or to know at the beggining, but I got used to them...
2)Yes, it's easy to understand mostly.
3)No, far away from what I've expected...
4)i have no idea...
5)Maybe lack of eating...
| Kaitachi chapter 1 . 4/9/2008
I really liked this chapter! I really didn't expected someone to write something as reallistic as this! Amazing! I hope you can keep writing the story!
| RonSa chapter 4 . 4/5/2008
I really love this story. please update.
| Hitorimono chapter 4 . 4/3/2008
Okay. This is a really good story, but I'm kinda sad that you haven't updated it in FOREVER! I hope you update eventually! Are you going to let Lee be a handsome green devil again eventually? Yes, his appearance is a crime against everything good in the world, but it's who he is. Without his... strange spandex suit, he is just a kid with wierd hair and too much dedication. With his outfit, he's a kid with wierd hair, too much dedication, and a wierd outfit. I also hope he doesn't go through Gai-sensei withdrawals while he's there. He might not get enough shouting about youthfulness and become unyouthful. Oh my gasp! No! Stay strong Lee! Do not lose your ridiculous youthfulness!
Sorry. I hope that wasn't TOO strange. PLEASE update soon!
| LightintheDarkess chapter 4 . 4/2/2008
Ah... Okay there has been confusion in cyberspace,
1st; got your e-mail off your bio(you haven't blocked it)
2nd the story (humane studies) summery states
'Updated: 8-24-07'(apperently somethings funky)
Which made me think that you haven't updated since 8-24-07, which led me to think that you've abandoned some pretty good stuff. so I e-mailed you.
P.S.- Will the Kyuubi show in the chakra reader?
| CJNyfalt chapter 4 . 3/29/2008
Very interesting story, I hope you update it some day.
| Yeaaa.No chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
Ok you may know me as the girl with the review with no sense what so ever, it used to have sense but for some unknown rezones the site cut it and doesn’t show all that I wrote.
So let me answer the questions, so I can clear my self.
[2. Based on the info Kire (Head of Psychology) gave, anyone care to guess what’s up with Ino’s brain?]
Ok based on the anime Ino belongs to a clan who uses techniques to do mid related jutsu, so who can’t say that part of that power its actually only found in that family.
[5. Was Ino characterized alright? She’s the one I had so much trouble with. Eventually I thought “what does a typical twelve year old girl think about?” and then it hit me: Sasuke. So, yeah, her person is sort of rooted around her infatuation with Sasuke, or her connection with her family, etc.]
Ok it’s been so long since I read this so I don’t remember exactly but what I can remember is that Ino wasn’t out of her character. One things is that you missed one thing, don’t worry I didn’t realize it for a long time so don’t feel bad, something interesting its that like Hinata and Neji, Ino doesn’t have pupils, why? I have no idea but she doesn’t. You can look to a picture you’ll see I’m right.
[6. I have this belief that Sasuke is very calculating during fights, but when he is out of immediate danger his emotions tend to swarm him more easily, causing him to be constantly arguing with himself, hence his brooding. Anyone notice the shift from emotional turmoil about the Sharingan to calm evaluation of the scientists and his escape plans?]
Of curse he can’t be all Mr. Cool all the time.
[8. Lee’s suit idea. Yeah. It explains why Gai is so insistent that the suit is a big part of the training, but I feel like it’s kind of lacking. However, it was the only explanation I could think of for why someone Lee’s size can be as strong as Kakashi when said someone doesn’t even have the capacity to use chakra. So, meh.]
Yes it make’s a lot of sense in you add chakra to the equation. But as my dad explained to me a person doesn’t have to be like gigantic to be super strong and actually having over sized muscles slows you down, and well Lee its fast. An other thing it’s that with the right training any one can be powerful and do not look it, take professional boxers; they are very strong and fast. So now you can convene both theories and I think you got Lee.
So yea that a resume of what I can remember I wrote last time but with less humor so that please update soon the story it’s awesome!
With All My Evil Love
| Orange Dive chapter 4 . 3/24/2008
1. They sounded like you did lots of research before you wrote anything down.
idea, only 13 ya know.(ps im not orange dive but the little brother.
3.I'm neutral-preffer, I always thought chakra had to do with stamina explaining why sakura doesn't have much(therefore more accurate control) compared to naruto(capable of making ten of hundreds of kage bunshin who is also hyper-energetic)
is good to see the scientists point of view on things as thats the point of this story, how we would deal with Ninja in this day and age.
I would want more Naruto but less annoying/juvenile view since that was just a face value insight on Naruto in my opinion. but its biased since i like Naruto most and i do imagine that hes smart enough to know that 10 cloneslotsa damage.
5.I think you got Ino down well.
6.I kinda did and i do think he would be paranoid about his sharingan. Losing everyone you know or loved because of that kinda does it to people
| Orange Dive chapter 2 . 3/24/2008
Pretty sure naruto can kage bunshin without hand seals
| Orange Dive chapter 3 . 3/24/2008
I loved this story.
If you want my opinion naruto and shikamaru were in charachter i doubt that Kishimoto couldve written it better.
NEED MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR
Im sorry dont know what came over me.
| Orange Dive chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
I loveed your story i found it intrsting and well played out.
YZou took the tired idea of naruto in our world and breathed new life into it .
I found it genuinly intresting the whole fugitive approach instead of some mary-sue toying around with them.
The beginning was kind of dodgy with a kinda deus ex machina to it but it was better than some random portal openning.
You were descriptive to the point of no overdoing it and I found myself shivering in anticipation for the next couple of paragraphs
thank you for posting such an intresting story.
| digiwriter1392 chapter 4 . 3/23/2008
Love the idea...
| Micromyni chapter 1 . 3/20/2008
I'm just glad that Gaara didn't get to come. somehow. i don't really care how he'd fit in, but i'm glad he didn't come. i love him, but can you just imagine the chaos? those darts wouldn't able to penetrate his sand armor, and he always carrys his sand with him...he can make more out of wherever there's dirt, and just add in his temper... yikes. i feel sorry for them, especially the ones i like. Shikamaru, Neji, Shino, Naruto... i hope they'll be ok by the end of this story. XD