|Reviews for Immortal|
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/13/2012
| Tis Kehaoh wait no its not chapter 1 . 3/9/2010
Naw,ssoo sweet! C: -
| luvwriting13 chapter 1 . 10/16/2009
so so so so so good! haha, have I said "so" enough?
| dairy queen chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
Hi bowie! It's Liz and Alice, and we just wanted to say how much we LOVED you're story! We're a little bored here at work so we're going to keep reading all your stories until a customer appears. Keep up the great work!
| Desi-Grasshopper chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
not bad. it was very cute
| alice and edward cullen chapter 1 . 3/15/2008
| Topaz Ki chapter 1 . 2/22/2008
thats really good!
| Um. Fish chapter 1 . 6/29/2007
Hurray! I've been waiting for so long to find a good carlisle/esme story. Besides the fact that I actually found one, it just happened to be amazing! well done and I hope you write more oneshots!
| western8 chapter 1 . 5/30/2007
| Nayame chapter 1 . 4/14/2007
Really, really cute.
Although I think the line "I'ma vampire" is just a bit... short? In my opinion, Carlis would have said it a bit... longer. Can't tell what I'm wanting to say .
Anyway. Really nice and really cute :)
| jandjsalmon chapter 1 . 3/23/2007
Wonderful Wonderful! I loved it. Didn't think it was OOC at all! Great Great job! ;)
| LongLostTwinOfIsabellaSwan chapter 1 . 3/20/2007
That was unbelievably sweet. A few minor grammatical errors were present, I think, and some awkward word choices, and a few inaccuracies in the storylore, but those things didn't matter quite so much. I loved it! It was sweet and not OOC at all - given the circumstances, as you said.
Found it on LJ :D
| Skittle.Kitty chapter 1 . 2/26/2007
That was adorable! It's so refreshing to see a Carisle/Esme fanfic! :3 I absolutly loved it!
| PenName SN chapter 1 . 2/12/2007
Ooh! I love it. Very cute. Deffinetly one of my favorites now.
Can't wait to read your next chapter. )
| waterandsky04 chapter 1 . 2/11/2007
that was cute, update soon