Reviews for White Chocolate
XVanitasxXxVentusX chapter 1 . 8/18/2015
What do you mean by eat that Judai Yuki
Anyhoo That was a great story
ButtonDoll chapter 1 . 6/1/2014
hahah the print on the box , yup your an idiot Shou , but a cute one!
Kaito16 chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
XD That was hilarious, I really liked the end. ahh, priceless.

Keep up the good work! O
kuroange1 chapter 1 . 11/14/2010
Ah, writing while you're sleepy. That would explain the typos, I would be scolding you for it if this story wasn't so epically written and if I wasn't up right now too, it's like 1:30 in the morning XD So yea, just wanted to say I loved the story!
Stone heroine chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
OMG I loved it! I'm one of those people who read a story once and will never read it again but this I could read for ever it is my fave fanfiction ever I'm a huge fan of shou/syrus he is soooooooooo cute! And I love the paring shou x manjome and all the other fanfics about them are all lovey and don't get me wrong those are awsome but a little lemon would not hurt anyone! You are awsome!
Demon's Light Angel chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
Oh god now my writing gonna be pevey.

Stop torturing me... on i won't make Zane have sex with Atty. Ahh. wow that was soo smexy. Expectaly when it said 'i wonder if he would go another round with me.'
15animefreak15 chapter 1 . 1/2/2008
XD He named it! Hilarious! Figures he'd name it after himself, though. I wonder if Sho-kun named his...O.O *shakes head fiercely* PERVY THOUGHTS, PERVY THOUGHTS! .
Doomed to be Uke chapter 1 . 10/21/2007
Hehe, I like this story a lot! Very smexy and cute! _

The line at the end "Happy Valentines Day, Show. Now open your legs for me..." PRICELESS. I don't know why that line amused me so much, but it really did. XD

Anyway, great job! Keep it up!
Jacof-alltrades chapter 1 . 7/5/2007
This was awsome! Of course Sho would miss the fine print! It's Sho! Anyway... I couldn't stop laughing through this entire thing because it was just so funny! Great Work!

SanitizedExplodingAirplane chapter 1 . 7/3/2007
"You silly, silly, Chibii" XD Priceless.
battlegirl15 chapter 1 . 3/19/2007
lol...Manjyome the king of pervs. Why that doesn’t surprise me….
stephanie chapter 1 . 2/11/2007
" I got him the black one.Y'know, cause i'm manjoume sanda."


"Yes,I am the king of Perverts! Eat that, Judai yuki!"

...even more priceless...

hot and funny good job oneesan!
Coco Gash Jirachi chapter 1 . 2/11/2007
Shou is kinda silly, but in a cute way!

And Shou... listen to Manjoume...
outsidegalaxy chapter 1 . 2/11/2007
Sucumbs to massive blood loss via nose
Freak0592 chapter 1 . 2/11/2007

Poor Syrus...his ass is gonna be soar tomorrow...

Damn, I'm still laughing XD

Only Syrus would get chocolate mix with aphrodisiac in it ;;

Great job, I cant stop laughing XD

~Freak (Carly)