This is just the best Narnia series I've ever read. I love the detail and warmth of your world building, the relationship between your characters, and the way devotion to Aslan is woven into everything. This series makes me want to pray in a way that almost no other works of fiction, fan or pro, do.

Just reread this and was knocked flat. You have such a gift with words! The depth of emotions shown by your character s and the complexity is breathtaking. And i think you may just love Peter as much as i do. Thank you for writing this. I read it years and years ago and gosh, is it just me or has fanfic writing gone downhill? I haven't read a story this great in years. Really, honestly, it's better than a slew of the published books i have read. What a gift!

I know this was written a long time ago and I don't know if the author will see it, but if you do, this is a fantastic story. I just read through the entire thing, and I was hooked. You captured Peter and Edmund perfectly! You did a great job!

OK- this time I'll start with the spelling correction! Just at "you have shouldered a mighty burden and born up well", it should be "borne", the past participle of "bear" as in shoulder, endure rather that "bear" as in "bear a child". :) And apart from that - what an amazing story. It's kept me going for days, just wanting to get to the part where Edmund rescued Peter! It's a wonderful epic of brotherhood.

This was so well written and so incredibly touching. You write emotion SO well, without it being O.T.T. or over-wrought. Wonderful. :)

This chapter is worthy of its title - "magnificent"! What emotions, and what skills of narration and description! Incredible. Just one little spelling mistake here - you have that Edmund was the "soul" witness to the combat, as in a person's mortal (or immortal, according to what you believe!) soul, when it should be spelt "sole", as in only.

Masterfully written.

Ah - Edmund is on the trail! An eagerly awaited event. The plot thickens! This was an excellent chapter with a mesmerising rhythm.

Poor Peter! Masterfully written.

A compelling chapter... Just a couple of corrections!
"counfounded" - confounded
"quizzicle" - quizzical
And "embarrassiment" - embarrassment, though that one was probably just a typo! Those are all when Peterkins is asking why Peter said "Good my Fox". ;)

A wonderful, amusing first chapter which honours C.S. Lewis!

Fantastic story enjoyed every chapter. I felt sorry for poor peter it seems like everybody likes to pick on him and yet poor littel edmond gets it even worse. I cant wait to read another of your stories they are all so amazing. Will your next story pick on edmond? I think that Edmond could take the strain of it better than Pete, that and I guess I just like to pick on him more than Peter.

Excellent chapter I just love peterkin he's just adorable. I also liked how you brought the bats back into play from your previous story when Edmond used them as his prefered couriers, I think that they represent him very well. They both work in the background or shadows and are not seen unless they want to be seen.

This story is absolutely amazing-the writing brilliant and plot thrilling! Every time I think of Narnia I think of this fic and I simply Must find it again to read! I can't get over the ending nor the tiny hints to the past-I love the past with Jadis too. The characterization is spot-on and the writing style so much like Lewis's own with your own astonishing flairs to each sentence! Your knowledge of Narnia is awesome! And your characters have such great and well-thought personalities I loved the giants-well not them personally but you know. You just amazed the entire fandom with this piece and I recommend it to everyone I know all the time-in turn I've seen so many people recommending this story too! I'm telling you in a roundabout way I guess, that you have true talent here and if you don't or haven't yet gone into writing your own books the world will desperately be missing out on a thoughtful and brilliant writer. (I've never said that before now in all my years...) I adore this story and your overall greatness! Thank you so much for writing this thriller!

So, out of rejoicing in your posting a new chapter to your work in progress, I am rereading your other excellent stories. I just wanted to note here how much I love this particular chapter in this wonderful tale. The relationship between Kanell and Edmund is so beautifully detailed. The fear is palpable. And the Children of the Night such perfect companions for dark, devious, devil-ridden Edmund. I wish I could spend a day in the treasure trove that is your brain!