Reviews for Nascent
Potgenie chapter 1 . 12/8/2007
Cute and very in character :)
Child of a Pineapple chapter 1 . 2/24/2007
Oh, good...a happy ending.

As soon as they left him with the baby I was imagining all sorts of horrible things.

But everything turned out well.

Great job!
BenignUser chapter 1 . 2/15/2007
Very original. I loved reading every word.

It's very realistic to picture Kourshiro in such a position. It took him a while to learn how to be a son, so I can only imagine the panic he would be going through if he suddenly learned he had to be a brother too.
Lord Puppetmon chapter 1 . 2/13/2007
Aw, that was incredibly cute. It's interesting to think of Koushirou as an older brother. Everyone is so in character, and the bit with Miyako having no maternal instinct was hilarious. Loved this story.
Higuchimon chapter 1 . 2/12/2007
That's so very cute! I've often wondered what would happen if Koushirou's parents had another child, and how he'd deal with it. This is a good way to look at things. And I admit I also like Miyako not having any maternal instincts whatsoever. ;) Well done!