|Reviews for Incorrigible|
| sovandeprins chapter 20 . 6/30
In reality, so little happened story wise. But development was shown. Miroku realize that although he is testing his luck in 'winning kagome over', he also learns that his intentions go deeper than that. He understands why he adress her the way he does, compared to other women and even Sango. And its not just because she is a priestess.
We Also got to peek into Kagome's thought, somewhat. Although her earlier behaviour with him is somewhat cautious and playful, she grows into it and probably learns a little more about herself in the process. I can only imagine the many subjects of thought that went through her mind during those quiet moments of digging. Regret, worry, understanding, relating, coming to terms... I suppose.
Again, I Love the small little details in this (and your writing over all). The fact that Miroku didnt just pull her close to him, but he thought of why he would want to do so and what it would gain him, how to play it through and respond if she reacts badly and so on and so fourth.
I dont want to ramble on but... idk message me if you wanna talk about MirKag in general.
Thank you for writing.
| sovandeprins chapter 19 . 6/30
Very, very sweet. I have to admit... I admire the little details in how Miroku adress Kagome. He waits for her to give him the clear (to sit with her by the river), takes care not to touch her when he asks if she needs help (however awkward that couldve been) and he means in when he exposes her potential lie... Its the little things that warms my heart with these two, and of course your wonderful writing.
Thank you, yet again, for writing.
| sovandeprins chapter 15 . 6/30
Where do I even begin. I will now forever see hand-holding as a symbol for MirKag. And also, wonderful writing as usual Ms. Forthright!
I (and many others) have always thiught your writing is wonderful. I am guilty of this myself, but a lot of fan authours over-describe scenes in their writing. You dont and I can still get a clear picture of whats going on in the story. (Although I have to Google what some words mean, as english isnt my first language so some of the less common words are harder to remember and identify.)
Love the pairing. I want to write for Miroku and Kagome forever from now. I want to draw them and watch them and read them and all that good stuff. Sucks that they arent a more popular pair... oh well.
Thank you for writing.
| sovandeprins chapter 8 . 6/22
Very cute, but Also made me think. I may have to use this thought for myself... Woops.
| sovandeprins chapter 2 . 6/20
This! This this this this! Exactly what I needed in my time of sadness, I suppose. Adorable and for one of my fave characters? I feel blessed, lol.
Thank you for writing. Would Love to see more outright romance from you ;)
| Darknessdawns chapter 21 . 7/22/2016
This collection was filled with wonderful pieces. They were all well written and enjoyable.
| tomorrow4eva chapter 21 . 5/22/2016
Well played, Kagome
| tomorrow4eva chapter 12 . 5/22/2016
Shippo should be taking notes. This is the kind of skill that suits a trickster, not magic traps. Great chapter.
| Full Moon Howl chapter 21 . 11/15/2015
| jarjayes chapter 3 . 7/30/2015
| jarjayes chapter 1 . 7/30/2015
You know what I like about Miroku?
He's so light-hearted.
True, he has his serious moments but I always Count on his character to make me laugh one way or another.
I usually don't bother reading fics involving this pairing but since it's you, I'm going to read this.
| Fang-and-nail chapter 2 . 10/19/2014
Very sweet. I can understand why Kagome would blanch at being called "My Precious." It screams Smeagol from LOTR. LOL.
| unfaithfullchild chapter 21 . 4/26/2014
Take 'em or leave 'em. Some were quite amusing I must say. Again (referring to other sets of drabble) I feel CU and AU should be posted separately but that's just my own opinion.
| Mary chapter 18 . 10/18/2013
...I...I love that idea. I mean, I could never see Sesshomaru working in a fabric store, but the way you had Miroku in there was astounding :)
| Heartfillia Hagane chapter 21 . 8/20/2013
A very compact story indeed! Love it... .