Reviews for Death in Beautiful Black Strands
riri chapter 2 . 1/6/2009
it was just so sad, i felt i was the one being stabbed in the heart.

anyways, i love it.

Its vey heart breaking and bittersweet.

though a part of me was like 'thats right otohata! you deserve it'
idioticsmile chapter 2 . 6/7/2008
this is a really great story! i wanted to cry...

haiz...aya x rei! Ü

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the decipherer chapter 1 . 9/15/2007
Your Story "Death in Beautiful Black Strands" is really inspiring...

it's the best story that i have heard so far...

if only you would have it in you to update it more often...

keep up the wonderful stories

Koneko-neechan chapter 2 . 7/30/2007
Simple but troublesome, it was awsome, but heartbreaking! You filled so many emotions in a single story! I really like that in a writer! The ending wasnt what I would have wanted, but hey, it was still (sorta) closure.

Four Friggin Blue Stars!

angeline chapter 3 . 6/16/2007
sad story...but great...update soon! love it...
Kaori-Urunasawa08 chapter 2 . 6/8/2007
i've made a review but when i submitted it, the page showed-"page cannot display..." damn it! mIt was very long. I couldn't write it all voer again. AW...but one thing is for sure! I WAS TRULY TOUCHED with this story...

GOD! I wrote everything single thing i felt in reading your story, in my last review...damn! AW...

I cried you know...







Kaori-Urunasawa08 chapter 1 . 6/8/2007

I enjoyed reading this chappy! D
ayayayaya chapter 3 . 5/30/2007
huhuhuhuh! why did you DO it...i thought they're gonna end up with huggy-huggy and a happy ever after! waH!
CuteBubbles chapter 3 . 5/18/2007
OMG! That third chapter of yours made me so emotional, like I could feel exactly how Rei was feeling and it's so painful. Argh and the part about Aya saying "I finally understand why you are like this to me- because you're my best friend" was so frustrating. The suspense was so good and I thought she finally noticed how much he loved her! Oh and about your writing, wow the third chapter was really written well. I loved the poems you inserted here and there and all the descriptive words and imagery. It was crafted perfectly, to heighten the suspense and emotion. Omg I loved it! It's just so sad. Why can't she get her memories back? Are you really not going to make this a happy ending?

There was an error that I noticed. It's just grammatical though. The line was : She knew what were coming to her. She had been doing this for almost a year to know what were to come to her. It's "was" instead of "were" since the subject is singular. It would be " She knew what was coming to her. She had been doing this for almost a year to know what was to come." I hope it helps. If you don't like my suggestion, then just disregard it but I think it sounds better that way.

Wow this is so long. Keep writing!
ramblingninny chapter 3 . 5/4/2007
wow ! what a nice story ! i love it ! kya !
aya0920 chapter 3 . 5/1/2007
The best fan fiction i have ever read for an anime, no the best fan fiction i have ever read period. Please update this one soon, cause a story like yours will never fail to impress.
angelrei06 chapter 3 . 4/30/2007
your story is great and i don't want to think that the latest chapter is the end of the story...i want the story to have the usual happy ending after the pains, regrets and sufferings aya and rei had endured...yah, i really think they deserved a happy ending, right? but, well, it's your story, you are the author, it's your decision...and i really really want to strangle rei for letting aya go...look what it got him...he's the one who's yearning for aya...anywayz, will you continue? i hope so...
Suuki-chan chapter 3 . 4/30/2007
well, if u want to finish the story u can.

BUT IT BETTER BE A HAPPY ENDING! i don't want otochi to be so sad! heartbroken. hopeless. sniff sniff.

oh well good luck with ur master's degree!
Evil Riggs chapter 1 . 4/30/2007
Some odd thematic and word choice repetitions here and there . . .

. . . but I generally endorse this event or product.
abubi-chan chapter 3 . 4/30/2007
this is such a sad ending. it kinda hurts when aya couldn't remember anything. it would've changed everything though. and rei... oh brother... couldn't be more sorry for the guy. i mean i like him being tortured and all, but this is death for him! i love how you have written this fic. i was so glad that this was a lot, lot longer! i love love love long chapters.

by the way, i hope you don't mind (and i DO know i'm asking too much) but if you could do even a short sequel? say, save rei for all of us? you know, during katase's and aya's wedding, aya suddenly remembers rei and her love for him sorta thing? i know it's mush but i know you could do so much better. however, i can't say that i'm not satisfied with this! this is absolutely beautiful! fate had been unfair to both of them (so there you go, the perfect match). hahahaha.

thank you for making this fic. this fic is absolutely beautiful. one of best i have read in GALS. it does not only have this angst/romance/drama plot, but the way you write and describe each one's feelings is very admirable. i could tell that i know only a few writers who could portray a character (much less a very unpredictable rei which makes it harder to portray him) like you do. i'm not a good writer myself, so i would like to applaud you for teaching me indirectly your wonderful writing skills.

cheers to you, buddy! i hope you write more fics. *wink* *wink*
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