Reviews for Unravel
ethnica chapter 2 . 4/1/2010
Love and lust are a dynamite combination. Excellent!
ibelieveintruelove chapter 2 . 10/13/2007
Absolutely beautiful, with the perfect witty Jim ending. Wonderful Job! D
BMuffin chapter 2 . 6/21/2007
*hehe* I absolutely loved the comedy relief at the end...Perfect:)
Aniversy chapter 2 . 4/9/2007
great story, you captured the characters well while creating a lot of hotness!
josephina chapter 2 . 3/30/2007
Wow...that was just so romantic, yet hot. I loved the last few lines; you captured the characters perfectly. Great job!
exotech chapter 2 . 3/4/2007
That was really well written. Wow. The end was awesome too. I'm glad you added a bit of comedy to it! Wouldn't of been them, without it!
jandjsalmon chapter 2 . 2/12/2007
WOW! *fans self*

Really really good! ;)
jandjsalmon chapter 1 . 2/12/2007
SO good. SO good. I could hear his anguished "Don't be sorry"! PERFECT!