Reviews for Straightened
The.Ocean.Shadow chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
its good but you should add more to it. It would be great potential for a story. :D
cruciolicous chapter 1 . 1/17/2008
wow...i could almost feel how scared he must've been...i actually sighed w/ relief in the end! awesome job ;].
Alysia Of The Pen chapter 1 . 5/4/2007
Whoa, awesome story dude! Are you sure you want to keep this a ONESHOT? You weren't very clear . . . lolz.

JK dude.
DuHSPaZZiNGFeL chapter 1 . 2/12/2007
I get it. It's a ONESHOT. lolz.

That was great!

Very nice drama added into it.

KrystalFruit22 chapter 1 . 2/12/2007
Original idea, I like!
libowie chapter 1 . 2/12/2007
I really liked this, and i cried at parts!
Ari-Griffin chapter 1 . 2/12/2007
Excellent! I can't wait to read more of your work.
Kumori Doragon chapter 1 . 2/12/2007
That was a very creative, ingenious idea. I absolutely loved it. Definitely favorited.