|Reviews for Naruto: Trail Of Freedom|
| stormofrage chapter 1 . 2/13/2007
You were definately firght about disregarding things in the manga. Its good so far and i hope you can make it as good as your first story. Can't wait for the next chapter.
| dragondancer123 chapter 1 . 2/12/2007
Cool first chapter! In really liked it and it was easy to follow, but it was a little confusing without a backround of it first. But I understand that it just adds to the story, so I'm not asking for an explanation...even though I'm pretty sure that you won't give me one anyway...
| Sprig chapter 1 . 2/12/2007
man! the way u start ur stories really rock! that's what i love bout reading other ppl's work: the way they just suck u right into it!. i can't wait to see what and y naruto is running. it's gonna be so interesting.
| AznPuffyHair chapter 1 . 2/12/2007
u might be surprised wut ur OCs will develop into either due to fan's demand or simply the story taking you for a ride. So i won't rule the OCs out as of yet
Anyway, interesting story. Just to make sure, u wrote this as if Naruto came from another village... so hopefully it's clear in teh next chapter.
| Loon Luu chapter 1 . 2/12/2007
Not bad for the first chapter. Still, we all prefer a basic summary of what going on, at least. Just brief summary should do.
| Jho chapter 1 . 2/12/2007
Hmm you're right when you say I have a lot of questions, I'll just wait for further chapters to see where you are going with this. I loved your writing on your previous story so this opening just intrigues me more than anything.
| alreadyover chapter 1 . 2/12/2007
Cool chapter. Well written! I guess i dont have much 2 say cuz i dont know whats going on, but its still interesting nonetheless. Naruto the astute writer.. haha. Anyway keep up teh good work and can't wait to see what happens next.
| Conceptor chapter 1 . 2/12/2007
cool start. just wondering, is this related to your other story in any way?
| Regres chapter 1 . 2/12/2007
ok confusing start but thats suposed to be like that c ya
| Parzival vi Britannia chapter 1 . 2/12/2007
wow naruto is a womanaiser, and is he writing a book, like jiraiya, alright, you've gotta put more lemons, i mean your the only good lemon writer here i bleeive. _ i cant wait for the next chapter.
| chm01 chapter 1 . 2/12/2007
looks interesting and i'm wondering are other characters besides Naruto going to appear?
| Arkeus chapter 1 . 2/12/2007
didn't understand a thing, and i am not sure such a thing is good for the beginning of a fic, after all not everyone will know you already, and may pass on a good fic just because of a confusing beginning...