I know that this was published ages ago and I've hardly hovered around the Bleach fandom, but I really enjoyed this piece. This breathed Orihime's thought process; it felt like her very much.

Thanks for the read~

For someone who only has a 'passing interest' in this series, you've put a lot of writers to shame with this piece.

How you crafted Orihime's feelings here felt so believable, but the only thing I will say is there was a line in the beginning that seemed out of place - especially coming from this character. When she said that Rukia&Ichigo wouldn't work out in the end b/c she was going to marry him instead ... while the girl is completely head over heels for that boy, it is in her nature to be frustratingly unselfish so she would never even consider that thought. She'd put another person's happiness before her own (obviously it shows here when she made the sacrifice of going off by herself) even if deep down, she really doesn't want to.

If you're gonna go down that route though, it'd be best to add more details to make it more... convincing.

But other than that, I can confidently say that if you had any real interest with Bleach, your stories wouldn've been (twice) the pleasure to read, I'm sure [[:

Ah, this story is cute, sweet, and melancholy all at once. Wonderful job.

I utterly loved this. It was so completely Orihime. Her whole silly thought process that makes her so adorable and fun. And yet you kept all that silliness and managed to make it cohesive and make sense.

The last line was heart wrenching and I loved it.

Gah, this was great! Thank you for this!

this is absolutely FANTASTIC!

very in-character

your a fantastic writer.

I love this story so much. Your Orihime is spot on and you are one of the few authors who manages to capture her crazy imagination.

And the mental image of her and Ulquiorra as Bonnie and Clyde is just priceless.

you really manage to get into orihime's head and sometimes this'd make me laugh, but other times (like the ending) it made me quite sad. it's impressive for such a short piece of writing to be able to bring out that kind of emotion so easily. well done.

selandora

You captured Orihime's character very well, particularly her ramblings.

you did a good job giving voice to Hime. I thought you did pretty well staying true to character, though I don't know that she really thinks so much of Ulqy (though he could come around sometime and I think it's possible that he might eventually defy Aizen and take a step away from the "loyal dog" role). I've started writing a story featuring her thoughts on Ulqy, I find it quite funny. But won't send me a notification email and it's been over a day *angerfied*.

Anyway, overall you did a great job, and I liked the touch on the threesome and Ichigo being jealous, haha. Sorry I love that whole lesbian love triangle idea. :)

O...wow...that was awesome! you captured Orihime's rambling tendencies perfectly and (somewhat scarily D )you seem to be in tune with her logic - or lack of it P it's a really great fic

That's brilliant. Really catches Orihime.

I just love it. It's adorable and so Orihime. All I can say is that I love and it really in character.

This is a really interesting style of portraying Orihime. At such dark times, she still retains her wacky imagination. Very enjoyable. It would be great if you would write more.

Oh...my... that was...*sniff* beautiful