|Reviews for Worthy|
| etherian chapter 1 . 2/12/2009
As your first story, this was very well done. It's awfully tough to develop an OC in a oneshot, but I think you did nicely. If you ever decided to expand upon the story, Jen would be an intriguing character to know.
| FreeSpritSprite chapter 1 . 2/12/2007
twas alright, kinda cute :-)