Reviews for Immortal Snapshots
J.F.C. James chapter 1 . 8/20/2007
Good story idea. I want to read more about Mirwen like the entire background on her.
Ivanolix chapter 1 . 2/13/2007
Good chapter! You write well, and Miir is quite cute. I can see some people naming her outright as a Mary-Sue, though, especially since you invented another race for her. I hope they are more discerning, though!