Reviews for Harry Potter and the Fight against Fate |
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![]() ![]() ![]() amazing second chapter, and so much...can't wait for more.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story! Plz update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() HOW COME DUMDBLEDORE DO SOMETHEING SO HORRIBBLE! RAH! * going to his office to punch him* i LOVE YOUR STORY - This is SO great ! I can't wait to see Harry in Hogwarts with all his knowledge friend with Ron Hermione and Neville (after with Luna and Ginny)...Will he try to be less hateful toward Draco ? I mean he won't act like he is his nemesis but try to turn him? |
![]() ![]() ![]() For having English as a second language, you write better than a great deal of the people at my school. Anyway, good job on this chapter, and I love the fact that they are fairly long. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is brill! |
![]() ![]() ![]() damn things are going hard for harry right now ... well he cant trust dumbles nemore nice chappy keep up the good work :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting story and for the most part well written except for some words that you stuck together and you also use "live" when you should be using "life". hope you can continue this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story. A point of clarification though: You did not really explain how Harry had a phoenix feather unless something escaped my attention. I enjoy reading your story. I just hope it doesn't end up another one of those Slytherin Harry stories. I can't stand up the good work. Trebsc |
![]() ![]() ![]() Quite good I must say |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good start, one thing that I would personally do is use "these" instead of 'these' for when people are talking, but of course this is my own personal preference... Either way though I wait to see you make the one thing that makes all time travel stories unique from one another, the changes to the cannon time line. Good Luck! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hehe funny harrys a baby and he has no clue whats going on :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() very good beginning! I hope you will still stick to canon a bit, but we will see. |
![]() ![]() ![]() good start i want to see hoe you do this AU |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great start! I can't wait to see how your story plas out! Update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very well written prologue. I love the suspense, the realization, the build up. A bit lacking in the technicality department, but that's okay. ) Update soon! |