this is great, any chance you'll continue it?

Worth the time. Thanks for sharing this, even without a grand finale.

I'm continually shocked that you haven't captured Peter and freed Sirius. Maybe you will now.

In this chapter, Harry is sad he can't Apparate to London, but he's been Apparating to school for the past 5 years. I think you forgot your own story. lol

Most fanfictions of this type of story show Harry as responsible and knows that any "future" death eater he encounters are in fact only just 11 year old kids.

But this Harry just thinks about killing one :)

Amberile's Harry Potter. Spends time thinking about killing children

I kinda like how you gave those pesky garden gnomes their own little backstory. I hope to see more chapters soon.

HAHAHAHA Now only Draco will be getting in trouble for being out of bounds lol.

I know it has been awhile but please please please continue!

This story is awesome! Write more please!

Doubt you will make any changes at this point, but who knows. I just wanted to help correct one of your misuses of a word due to the English as a second language. You have repeatedly used 'live' when you have meant to use 'life'. There has been other words that have popped up, but I would say that was the most common. Other than this, I just wanted to say that I have enjoyed reading the story and hope your training went well and that you are doing well in your chosen career.

i am dying to know what happens next...i am in love with this story !...please do update soon!

Please Update.
Aly

Hi. I am thoroughly enjoying your story. However you like many have the their, there, and they're problem. Also the you, you're, and your handicap. My biggest gripe comes from this chapter. You started off great and then somehow, you switched from duel, which means fight to dual, which means two. I'm not sure why you kept changing the word in this chapter. However, great story so far. Keep writing. You are good at it

You really need a beta who is more proficient with the English language. Many homonyms are misused, especially their/there/they're and to/too. You are inconsistent in the use of commas and quotation marks. Paragraph formatting is terrible, particularly in this chapter. You also occasionally put your verbs in the wrong tense. A more thorough read-through is desperately called for. Keep writing; you can only improve if you know what you are doing wrong.

You need to look up the definitions of 'life' and 'live'. They are not the same. Neither are they interchangeable. You seldom use the correct one. Your story is interesting so far, but your grammar needs some attention. Readability could be greatly increased by paying more attention that you have selected the correct word. Thank you for your contribution to the world of Harry Potter Fan Fiction.