Reviews for Time Travel is Impossible, at Least for Humans
sirena2fire chapter 3 . 6/28
This is a nice and interesting story and I would like to read more of it. But please put scene breaks because it is difficult to understand the story when you immediately jump from one thing to another without something telling you that there is a scene change. And please don't rush details, take your time to flesh out some scene to make it easier for the reader to understand. Thank you
ImPrettyGreatJustSaiyan chapter 6 . 6/12
I would love to draw him! If u could pm me with a bit more details that would be awesome :3 and i love this story btw and the whole plot behind it, its just perf
MattKennedy chapter 14 . 4/8
Great story! :) And an interesting twist with the mystery of what is happening to Kakashi! Looking forward to finding out what happens next!
aliya87 chapter 14 . 12/28/2014
when fanfic updated
Preemtive Karma chapter 7 . 11/1/2014
I love your story so far, this is the first time I've seen a magical Iruka being the time traveler! There is just one thing I want to pick on, the scene changes are very jarring. It might be the website removing your line breaks, but it's making the story confusing to read. I had to go back and reread parts a few times, like when the scene changed from everyone's vacation to Kakashi with a breathing tube in.
mochilera chapter 14 . 10/24/2014
┬┐una marca misteriosa? hu esto se esta poniendo muy interesante. :)
Tsukiyo69 chapter 14 . 10/23/2014
Thanks for the update ! Some interesting development you did with Kakashi and Iruka's newly shared power.
I wonder how things will now go. :)
davycrockett100 chapter 14 . 10/22/2014
awesome
Girl-luvs-manga chapter 14 . 10/22/2014
He is going to have to after all they are his soldiers.
Silvermane1 chapter 14 . 10/22/2014
cool
Korregidora chapter 14 . 10/22/2014
I nearly squealed with joy when I saw this had been updated! I enjoy this story.
bloodshound chapter 14 . 10/22/2014
awwww, boo. Haku still bought it. ah well, at least Keshi and his team were solid this time out. Well done Iruka.
buterflypuss chapter 14 . 10/21/2014
good chap
Guest chapter 13 . 10/14/2014
please continue!
buterflypuss chapter 13 . 7/31/2014
good chap. kakashi doesnt need to worry so much, its probably a mate mark, or even more than that one that extends kakashis life to match irukas
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