Reviews for Twisted Fates
EachPeachPearPlum chapter 6 . 9/6/2007

i love it. not a fan of AU usually, but this was great.
rekahneko chapter 6 . 9/5/2007

Loved how you managed to end it!

I was wondering how you could possibly make it all work out, but hoping that you would be able to.

Sure enough, romance, sweetness, and lots of wonderful Sirius and Remus-ness.

Tylendal chapter 6 . 9/5/2007
Aw, how adorable. I loved it though the ending seemed a bit rushed. Maybe you could write a short sequel; an extention on Remus' side of the story on the terrance? Or maybe a month and so after Sirius and Remus have gotten together?
slash chapter 6 . 9/5/2007
loved it, ended nicely but quickly. ...not enough sex...
aturnofthepage chapter 6 . 9/5/2007
i liked the ending but i think you should write a very short chapter about what happens after. Just my opinion don't feel presured. *presure presure*
arabellaw chapter 6 . 9/5/2007
it was a great end

I really enjoyed it
amy chapter 6 . 9/5/2007
oh my god

so cute : ]

and very well written

i went aww at the end

out loud

and that is rare for me


good work
kreoff210 chapter 6 . 9/5/2007
i lerv it! XD

all of it, thanx

MagicalWinry chapter 6 . 9/5/2007
Thank you for the amazing story!
Moony that Chick in Black chapter 6 . 9/5/2007
:) i loved this story
PaddyWaddy chapter 6 . 9/5/2007
*huge grin on my face* ZOMG that was sweet.


Cute ending! Finally together YYAY!
arabellaw chapter 5 . 9/5/2007
I really like this new chapter, and you got extra points for not dropping it

I hope that all the writting inspiration in the world come to you
imber de caelum chapter 6 . 9/5/2007
Amazing story and adorable ending! Thank you so much for writing!
Snowy Winter Tales chapter 6 . 9/5/2007
Ah, honestly? I thought it was going to go on a lot longer than that - I had anticipated it, even, and I'd always prided myself upon being able to read a story well in that sense. I find it quite a pity, I'm left with this slightly strange feeling of the ending being slightly too rushed –possibly because of my failed assumptions.

Regardless, it was a nice read. There are some mistakes here and there that made me cringe, but that’s more because I like Mr Grammar and Mr Spelling far too much; besides, they weren’t too distracting from the actual plot line, which is good. I liked it; I’ll keep an eye on you (in a completely non-stalkerish way).

Snowy Winter Tales.
kreoff210 chapter 5 . 8/23/2007

i lerv it.


more please.

and thanx for tellin me the next chap was up..i guess i never put this story on my alerts. heehee
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