|Reviews for Naughty Girls|
| Animelover chapter 1 . 11/18/2014
This is only a joke for my classmate she makes the stories.
YOU THOUGHT I WOULDNT DO IT.
| xxxRavensPerchOnMyHeadxxx chapter 6 . 7/20/2014
You know, I really think this should be rated M. There is all these adult references in there. That and the drinking.
| anonymous chapter 6 . 6/22/2014
It was good except a few things. You need to re-check your grammar and your spell check. Defiantly means in a rebellious manner. YOu meant definitely. You used was where you should have used were. Just re-read your work and re-check it. Some of your sentences are a little awkward.
On a reading note, next time make it a little naughtier ;P
| Crazygirl200 chapter 1 . 2/25/2014
awsomer than epic
| nathen chapter 4 . 12/20/2013
LOL! I named my 4th chapter the samething!
| PurpleHippopotamus chapter 1 . 12/5/2013
Someone call the fire department. My lady parts are on fire. Hot dayum
| Guest chapter 6 . 8/9/2013
That was... trippy, to say the least. ...Kewl!
| Draculaura luvz Valentine chapter 6 . 8/6/2013
LOVED THE WHOLE THING! SO SEXY!
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/17/2013
| Concolor44 chapter 6 . 6/8/2013
Okay ... do one thing for me? The word is spelled "definitely". It means "surely" or "certainly" or "without doubt". Something is "definite" if it is absolute, or fully defined.
"Defiantly" means "expressed with defiance" or "in a rebellious manner". It comes from the word "defy" (to oppose).
The two words have no connection at all, other than beginning with the letters d, e, f, and i. Please, please, please get it corrected.
Now, as to the STORY, I have a great deal more positive feedback. Each of the girls was funny in her own way. I think you kept Star and Jinx firmly in character (thank you) and I supposed Raven's lapses may be explained by her annoyance with her boyfriend ... and all that tequila. ("One tequila, two tequila, three tequila, floor!") Sounds to me as if all of those girls have an ABNORMALLY high tolerance for alcohol.
Hangovers are no joke. I've never had one myself, but I've certainly (definitely?) tended to a lot of friends who went through it.
Thanks for writing this. It was a lot of fun.
| Concolor44 chapter 5 . 6/8/2013
Definitely my favorite chapter so far!
| Sarah chapter 6 . 3/3/2013
Robin and star too long and lol for jinx I wanted more of them and bb and raven and bumblebee and cy too much robstar
| Sarah chapter 5 . 3/3/2013
Wow I felt kid flash and jinx was short
| Sarah chapter 4 . 3/3/2013
I wish see more would take more charge of things u know...
| Sarah chapter 2 . 3/3/2013
Wow why didn't raven take aqua lads shirt off and feel his abs cause haes sexy!