|Reviews for Ascension to Kitsune|
| Guest chapter 3 . 6/7
This is getting old. Where the hell is the originality?
| Griffin87443 chapter 8 . 2/15
update soon i like your story
| Guest chapter 7 . 6/30/2016
... really the whole arrogant routine really?
| PLEASE READ ME chapter 5 . 6/30/2016
disclaimer: I am not flaming I am trying to give you constructive criticism: Constructive criticism is the process of offering valid and well-reasoned opinions about the work of others, usually involving both positive and negative comments, in a friendly manner rather than an oppositional one. The purpose of 'constructive criticism is to improve the outcome. I have no rights to this story and all affiliated parts and I only clam the stuff I add or subtract from it (to help keep lawyers off my back)
The story character interaction I highly dislike. Just a lot of Q&A parts, that sound like the people are just being either obvious to a fault, or sarcastic to a fault. (Which just make it not, haha silly, ((but urge I cant seem to want to continue to read this, but trying to because it would be a shame to not find out what happens next(silly))). Witch for me is not a story I would go back to often, like I would only check on it like once a year to see if it were updated or fixed and or patched (2.0/ 3.5/ 7.9 exedra)
| my 2 guys chapter 8 . 10/18/2015
that was good keep the chapters coming
| Darkbloodz chapter 7 . 7/14/2015
Just came back to re-read the whole thing again, soooo super waiting for your next update! ]
Love your fic! Cant wait for more!
| ARSLOTHES chapter 7 . 6/18/2015
looking forward to see the next chapter
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/2/2015
wow. much angst, bad write...
| denis.d2505 chapter 8 . 3/8/2015
A very good story shame
Faved and Followed in hopes of new updates!
| RED Roman Pyro chapter 2 . 11/25/2014
Walls of text and full of cliches, yeah is a story I can't read or recomend
| XxXxSnowxXxX chapter 7 . 11/6/2014
He said he would read the scroll before Sarutobi told him to in earlier chapters..
| XxXxSnowxXxX chapter 5 . 11/6/2014
I will note that the rules Naruto stated in the contract changed. I recall him saying that if he did not feel as if his instructor could teach him then he did not have to be a part of the team. This rule was disregarded and not used. I have also seen that you changed how Naruto acted towards Sarutobi. As I recall, Naruto has no trust in him and Sarutobi only wants to keep him in the village. keep your characters personalities the same or you could confuse other readers.
| Dracoessa chapter 5 . 8/28/2014
*cackles at kakashi*
| Gaara's Demon Sister Shi chapter 8 . 7/27/2014
this is a good story so far and I really like it and wish for you to continue it please
| Sorasdream chapter 2 . 4/2/2014
Poor Naruto...damn the villagers are crazy psycho's eh?
Sounds interesting so far!