|Reviews for Ascension to Kitsune|
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/2
wow. much angst, bad write...
| denis.d2505 chapter 8 . 3/8
A very good story shame
Faved and Followed in hopes of new updates!
| RED Roman Pyro chapter 2 . 11/25/2014
Walls of text and full of cliches, yeah is a story I can't read or recomend
| XxXxSnowxXxX chapter 7 . 11/6/2014
He said he would read the scroll before Sarutobi told him to in earlier chapters..
| XxXxSnowxXxX chapter 5 . 11/6/2014
I will note that the rules Naruto stated in the contract changed. I recall him saying that if he did not feel as if his instructor could teach him then he did not have to be a part of the team. This rule was disregarded and not used. I have also seen that you changed how Naruto acted towards Sarutobi. As I recall, Naruto has no trust in him and Sarutobi only wants to keep him in the village. keep your characters personalities the same or you could confuse other readers.
| Dracoessa chapter 5 . 8/28/2014
*cackles at kakashi*
| Gaara's Demon Sister Shi chapter 8 . 7/27/2014
this is a good story so far and I really like it and wish for you to continue it please
| Sorasdream chapter 2 . 4/2/2014
Poor Naruto...damn the villagers are crazy psycho's eh?
Sounds interesting so far!
| Inu Tashiro p chapter 8 . 3/19/2014
Update! And put some slash in this!
| acetwolf94 chapter 8 . 3/1/2014
PLEASE ADD MORE! I'm HOOKED! Its really AWESOME!
| dragonflygoddess77 chapter 2 . 2/21/2014
for the one who said he was using the word wrong, slave is the last definition just to let you know! keep up the excellent work GouberMan —noun
(in the feudal system) a person granted the use of land, in return for rendering homage, fealty, and usually military service or its equivalent to a lord or other superior; feudal tenant.
a person holding some similar relation to a superior; a subject, subordinate, follower, or retainer.
a servant or slave.
| fireclaw239 chapter 8 . 2/19/2014
YAY! i can't wait until the next update.
| DarkPirateKing69 chapter 2 . 2/16/2014
well, the punctuation is pretty bad.. but it's your first story and grammar is something that gets better with time and dedication. still waiting to see where this goes.
| DarkPirateKing69 chapter 1 . 2/16/2014
i'm always little skeptic when it comes to AU stories. i've read lot of excellent ones, but it's still there. especially when there are gods and such involved. well, just gotta wait and see where this goes. one of my favorite stories of all time is 95% AU.
| Googlemo chapter 1 . 2/14/2014
Im gonna write abit for your AN(on author page). Manga Naruto is mainly about Sasuke because Sasuke is the ONLY japanese character , yep thats pure favoritism and patriotism. Uchiha are probably the only pure japanese clan and author LOVES THEM. Naruto is so european-looking that japanese auditory can't really connect with him. Also the idea of revenge is much easier to understand than the idea of SAVING and CHANGING the World. So stupid teenagers are drawn to Sasuke.