Reviews for Unprecedented Youth |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it! |
![]() ![]() This story is just too adorable, and probably the first where Jack is in character around a small child. Well done for that. Will be waiting curiously for more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I actually just looked up potc awe (not shorthand of course) and found it right away on virtual empire pirates of the caribbean 3 script. Wonder what she would think of Barbossa? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please udpate soon! lady O. |
![]() ![]() I'm sure, with the movie now out on DVD, you can just look at that. I was really quite surprised by this story. I thought I wouldn't like it, but then I ended up loving it. You kept the characters in character when dealing with Creda, and wrote a believable plot. It's nice to see that she's not Jack's long lost daughter (that's so overly done in this fandom, with only a few good ones) and that she's not altering the story in any way. Wasn't too sure about the name at first (since unusual names were very uncommon), but I ended up loving that, too. Can't wait to see where you'll take this in AWE. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, sad chapter. But I like it how Jack seems to care about her. Cute! As for the script...you can get them? I always just memorized the lines from the films. And if you need the lines, just look at other people's fics. That's how I wrote mine. Feel free to look at them. I know it's been a while, but please continue with this story! I love it! nineteennintytwo |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw...it pointed to him. That was cute! I like how the way he's beginning to warm up to her! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha! I love this! I really think you've got Jack really In Character! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, that girl wants to go everywhere! Great chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was funny! And I liked that bit at the end! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Creda is just so cute! I have a four-year-old brother, but he isn't as clever this girl. I wonder what she was doing in Tortuga anyway? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another hilarious chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() *The reviewer has rolled on the floor laughing* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! Where is the next chapter? I'd really like to read it...You left it at a cliffie! No fair! DDEC |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awsome story! I like Creda, she's so cute! Is there going to be more? (Yes, I know, not the most helpfull review...) Clea :D |