bravo! if i wasn't flailing in the beauty of your prose, i was smiling at the interactions between balthier, vaan, and the rest of the cast. fabulous story!

ohmygod this is amazing. oadiaUHSd

The characterization was wonderful, I felt, and the BalVaan parts were having me amused and saddened all in one story, which is a good combination. I got tingly giddy feelings throughout the whole story, and the writing style was fantastic, especially with the witty dialogue and responses, particularly Vaans, that sneaky boy xD

ILU 8D this pairing is amazing, more so when written by you.

STILL the best FFXII story ever written!

I really miss you writing in this fandom!

Very kyute and wonderfully fluffy story.

Sarah: Awesome story! love it. I love how Balthier again and again denies his need for Vaan's love. great job on writing it. i've only gotten to the point in the game where you have to fight Vossler, so i haven't gotten very far at all. But i can't wait to finish the game eventually. but anyways, i so love this story. i hope you have other niceties like this to read, as i'm gonna look at your profile in a min.

You own so much talent that it's all I can do to not bow at your feet. I'm serious. This story is amazing.

I found it hilarious that Balthier thought that Vaan was in love with Ashe. Truth be told, I was actually led on by his thoughts into believing that it was true.

The characterization in the story was excellent. For some reason, I kept feeling the urge to laugh at Balthier and Vaan's bantering.

Anyways, keep up the great work!

ah fairy tale romance or what?

I honestly can't express how wonderful this story was. Your way with words is just insanely brilliant.

You got me clasped to this story from beginning to end. I loved every last single word of it.

Very, very well done :D

Words cannot express how awesome I think this fic is. I like the way you told their story & the ending 3

ahh i love this. that about sums it up ;) , thank you for this, i enjoyed it immensely.

this is fantastic, really.

perfection in words.

That was wonderful!

I wish I could articulate how incredible a read that was!

It was heart-wrenchingly stirring, frighteningly intelligent, and FUNNY! With remarkably spot on character voices. Plus,I have a hidden angst bunny that likes Vaan whumpage too...(Please don't tell anyone.)

So all around, this fic surpassed all previous standards of excellence in this fandom-for me at least.

More please? (Yes, I know-the hungry masses always clamor for more...)

well rounded story awesome characterisation, despite that you say otherwise. It sounds greedy but the ending left me wanting more. I thought it was too sudden. It made me laugh tremendiously excellent work but please let your sub conscious annoy you as much as would force you to correct some grammer? XD

:chuckles: I liked the ending to this. It amuses me greatly that, in response to all of Balthier's words and thoughts and reasons of why their whatever it's called needs to end, Vann just says 'no'. And that's it for Vaan. I like, I really do, and I'm glad this had a happy ending.

I'm faving this, also, because it is great. I especially liked when Balthier takes a hit for Vaan, when he had just said a month - was it a month? - earlier that he never would.

I loved how you made Vaan more than the annoying child that most fanfics describes him as. This is seriously the best Balthier/Vaan fanfic I have read so far. Fran and Penelo wasn't mentioned much, which is sort of sad since they are interesting characters. But nothings perfect.

I'll go check your profile now, great fic!