Reviews for Echoes
AnjuShoma95 chapter 10 . 6/5/2010
this story was weird but awesooooome D
AtheneMiranda chapter 10 . 2/21/2009
*nods* Sweet, damn sweet, and I have rarely seen anything in fanfic cooler than an army of mutant clone ninjas that fund themselves via POKER. They are so amazing I want to pretend that they're real. Or at the very least, canon. They'd eat the FROGs for breakfast.
AtheneMiranda chapter 9 . 2/21/2009
..I don't know what I love most here; the two hundred mutant clones, the fact that they have a cold fusion reactor and Snake knows exactly what a cold fusion reactor looks like, the text messages, the explodyness, or the kissing.
AtheneMiranda chapter 7 . 2/21/2009
...Oh, ow.

This is sweet, and painful, and *wrong*, but in a good way. I have a real squick for people ignoring Otacon's 'no's - I mean, it's canon that the guy was sexually abused by his stepmother - but it's so *wrong* here that it works.
AtheneMiranda chapter 3 . 2/21/2009
Hey, I'm reading this story on a recc I saw on an LJ community, and I'm really enjoying it; this chapter is the best so far. The physical contact and teasing is both hot and in-character; I like your use of Alaska, it's good scene-setting without going overboard, and you're using the setting to reinforce the characterisations; and most especially, I like the intelligence that's gone into this. You've made both these people seem emotionally and mentally well-rounded. Surprisingly few fanficcers do that, and less have full respect for David's intelligence (THNX KONAMI), so I love this.

I also love the Desert Storm coffee supplies. The idea that he's been hoarding coffee since the early 1990s is fucking hysterical. Rock on.
pajaroenvuelo chapter 10 . 1/24/2008
Oh man, I loved this so much. XD
MsBokkyaku chapter 8 . 12/15/2007
This is such a wonderful story. I'm still new to this fandom (though not MGS overall, of course) and was looking for a nice long Snake/Otacon fic, so this really hit the spot.

Spot on characterization, wonderful dialog and an awesome plot. You just won a large chunk of internet. Expect it to arrive on your doorstep in 2 to 6 weeks.

livingsoul12066 chapter 5 . 8/23/2007
you know, it wasn't until Otacon said "she was playing and they shot her" that I made the connection from this girl to Sniper Wolf. and that made me cry. ;;
neon flights chapter 10 . 6/17/2007

No amount of words can describe how great this story was. I am SO checking out your other work. Amazing.
SilentOmega12e chapter 10 . 3/28/2007
I think they are a sweet couple, its just Hideo isn't telling us yet!
Elrik Lasanti chapter 10 . 3/19/2007
Excellent ending. Love your writing.
PirateShotgun chapter 10 . 3/18/2007
I am speechless. That was bloody f'ing brilliant. You should... write... another. I smell a sequel.

Really. The story was engaging, Hal and Dave rocked, you are just totally amazing. Best Metal Gear fanfic I've ever read. Thank you, so much!
Karaii chapter 10 . 3/11/2007
Elrik Lasanti chapter 9 . 3/9/2007
YAY! Back together. Fantastic story so far.
Elrik Lasanti chapter 7 . 3/7/2007
Oh. Good chapter. The last three lines are perhaps the best last 3 lines I've ever read.
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