|Reviews for Vivi returns|
| AZEM the gr8 one chapter 9 . 5/23
Love it, the storys great
4th paragraph down the line reads "I can get used to that" I'm not 100% but did you mean can't?
| AZEM the gr8 one chapter 6 . 5/23
~18th line down, change God to good in " not even a God warm up"
| Guest chapter 8 . 6/2/2016
| naruto uzumaki the kitsue sage chapter 18 . 5/18/2016
God Usopp strikes again
| ExpertoftheBlade chapter 29 . 4/27/2015
you could have said it was already over when Vivi joined
| Guest chapter 32 . 2/24/2015
would have been nice except for the Zoro vs Vivi thing...not in a million years can she ever defeat the guy. Granted she got stronger but come on, you could have made it realistic.
| Guest chapter 7 . 11/7/2014
Where the fuck is carue?
| Guest chapter 31 . 8/31/2014
I really liked this chapter but honestlh
| doubledamn chapter 15 . 9/9/2013
Great, just one criticism. Kuro - Kuro would have thought the plan, he knows how much the Straw Hats support each other and how defensive Luffy got when Kuro attacked his own crew. Kuro would have definitely come up with that plan.
| doubledamn chapter 14 . 9/9/2013
Nice, very inspirational and very much like Vivi. Well done with the capturing the character.
| doubledamn chapter 13 . 9/9/2013
Vivi "The Peacock" Nefratati. Bounty - 25,000,000
| doubledamn chapter 11 . 9/9/2013
Rarest? So a logia, or a mythical zoan. Or alternatively if you're going for fan-based fruit a Deity fruit. Of course some consider The Buddha fruit, a deity fruit. But I am really interested in what fruit that is.
| doubledamn chapter 5 . 9/7/2013
"Won't completely spoil it"? Come on! You practically shouted from the rooftops that he's going to eat a Devil Fruit. I'm going to rule out a Logia, they're too rare for him to find one on such short notice, plus it would take him a few months at least before he had any semblance of control of his abilities no matter what type of DF he got, Kohza didn't really plan this out well did he?
| doubledamn chapter 3 . 9/7/2013
| doubledamn chapter 1 . 9/7/2013
Kohza is not going to like this. Not at all. Sucks to be him, have fun Vivi.