|Reviews for Threshold Viral Evolution|
| RLS83843 chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
Kind of a differnet mix
| geekgirl76 chapter 1 . 3/1/2007
I'm just offering a bit of constructive criticism. In your summary you used "it is much more better". If you want people to bother with your stories, you may want to use proper grammar in the one place that brings readers in. I didn't even give this story a once through because of the poor grammar used in that one little blurb.
| GlowingHeart chapter 1 . 2/19/2007