|Reviews for Addiction|
| Shu of the Wind chapter 1 . 3/26/2011
Seriously, L...at least go see a dentist and EXERCISE if you're going to be eating that much sugar for the rest of your (grievously shortened) life...otherwise we'll all be worried about you.
| AngelicRose8 chapter 1 . 8/25/2010
The thought of L trying to give up sugar is funny. And I loved the part "It's repulsive, and supposedly healthy. There's carrots in it, sesame seeds. Carrots belong in cake and sesame seeds in a pastry. Seaweed belongs in the ocean, but apparently this is all meant to go in his stomach. Great."
That made me laugh.
| WithABunny chapter 1 . 8/20/2008
Aww, and he tried so hard, too! But finally, he had to succumb to withdrawal. Darn. Oh well - L wouldn't be L without his beloved sweets, anyway.
| MysteryLady-Tx chapter 1 . 7/29/2008
LMAO...hehehe, oh man, that was AWESOME, poor L...
| StarFilledNightSky chapter 1 . 6/23/2008
I was suprised he lasted as long as he did. This fic was super. It has L being human, I doubt there arn't many of us out there who could live on a diet like his without contantly knocking at deaths door.
I could picture L behaving that way, from his sugar withdraw. It is really hard to give up something you love, and can't live without. Well good job on the fic! C:
| TwistedLilBarbie chapter 1 . 5/14/2008
| DaydreamerGal chapter 1 . 4/26/2008
okay... I don't really know what to say about that... -squints-
| beyondormason chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
The second I saw the summary, I was like "Wha? Pft! No WAY."
Haha, that was interesting. Never thought I'd witness L going through withdrawal. Of course, we all know L would never get diabeetus or anything. Because he is JUSTICE. So it's 'kay.
| Crazy Manga Girl chapter 1 . 3/3/2008
My eyes widened at the summary at this.I was like "L can't give up sweets! It ruin EVERYTHING." But he went back so I'm proud. . -coughBIG-L-FANcough- Raito, I mean "Light" wasn't in this very much I see hm. That's okay he's not that important. -is officially crazy seeing how Death Note is based on Raito getting a Death Note.-
Well this was very cute keep up the good work!
| Suimuran chapter 1 . 12/27/2007
Aw, L just cannot do something as difficult as giving up sugar! We all can understand that...anyway, this was really well-written, Poison love it!
| joseph-dreamer chapter 1 . 11/30/2007
Great story! Really funny. I love L.
| write25 chapter 1 . 8/25/2007
Very well written and very amusing! I'm glad you had him go back to sugar in the end, otherwise it would have been unlike him. I think this one's going on the fave list. Great work. Mariah
| Kid9535 chapter 1 . 7/4/2007
Dude! That rocked! Never seen L go so violent over deprivation, but I guess that's what happens, bet the same thign goes for Mello...hehehehehe. Gotta go write somemore! AHAHAHA, Im crrazy... oh wait...*favs* kay bye!
| Caliguana chapter 1 . 5/7/2007
i love it i never would have thought of L off sweets. i wonder if this would be teh true L if he did go off sweets, it was wel written and wonderfully thought up good job!
| Werewolf of Fire chapter 1 . 5/5/2007
This fic is pure genius. I swear I laughed and giggled through the entire thing, though I did attempt to be serious and root L on in his decision (No matter how long it didn't last). It seemed as though L replaced his sweets with Hijiki salad, considering he was eating it everyday.
"It’s not like he’s addicted." - Somehow, I don't think any of us believe that. But it's nice to see that L's attempting to convince himself. It proves he's human.
“I love it!” he snaps, “but I’m trying to stop. So, if you would be so kind as to not tempt me to tear it out of your hands and consume it, we can proceed with the meeting.” - I pictured L as a fierce dog when I read this bit, snapping and growling at Matsuda. It made me laugh and want to dangle a piece of chocolate in front of his nose, just to see his self-control break.
"But in the end it’s Mogi who does something, when he comes back from filing he hands him a mug full of tea. He gives him sugar too; apparently he’s missed the fact that L has stopped." - I don't believe that for a second. Mogi's probably realised that L was going nuts and sought to make him better. Hence, tea and sugar. L's perfect nudge in the -right- direction.
"Screw it, that was fabulous, health and Hijiki salad can both go straight to hell." - Amen to that! I'm (admittedly) a chocoholic. I feel your pain L! I could see L sitting there, -inhaling- his gallon of strawberry ice-cream. It's a very pleasing picture.
This was well written and very in character. I'm impressed as to the amount that he is considering it's hard to make any character in character when they're going crazy from being depraved of their life source. Love it. Love your writing style. It's easy to read and understand.
Awesome work! _