Reviews for Young and Aspiring
Morgen Elisabeth chapter 3 . 6/22
More please.
Mmeggy999 chapter 3 . 3/27/2014
Love it! Update soon!
YA Reader chapter 3 . 12/13/2013
This young reader aspires to read the rest of this amazing fanfic...will you help her achieve her noble aspirations? I'll love you forever!
AquilaPallas129 chapter 3 . 8/10/2013
This is gonna be interesting to read, I don't think that I've read a story were harry is completely emotionless before!

I look forward to your next chapter.
Reader-anonymous-writer chapter 3 . 11/13/2011
~ I'm just…empty. There's this big, gaping hole in my chest and it's growing and growing and swallowing me whole.

~ He doesn't silence the noise, it's only fair to give them some kind of lead.

Interesting game.

I don't like antagonistic beginning... And really, walking three hours in the forest isn't an exciting game, at all. It would have been more thrilling if Harry looked for a way to see a ninja as soon as possible without the ninja noticing him. Use silencing and scent-concealing wand-less non-verbal charms, but don't use invisibility.

Good luck.
Niwaki chapter 3 . 5/24/2011
nice I liked this please continue soon
Sayu Blishtoka chapter 3 . 10/3/2010
This time its been what? 2 1/2 years since an update. wah!
Cosmos Angel and Yami Darkness chapter 3 . 7/21/2010
keep going please
Von chapter 3 . 7/13/2010
Very interesting! Fresh new ideas, can't wait to see how it turns out!
ShadowGuardianX chapter 3 . 6/28/2010
omg. please tell me you arent stopping this story? I love the plot. poor harry. and your writing is amazing. you use wonderful imagery and great description, but you are careful not to overdue it. I cant wait to read how team 7 deals with apathetic god like harry. I mean really, he could probably destroy konoha single handedly in your story. its great. and i really truely hope that you decide to continue and update this amazing story. okay i got a little worshippy there. hehe oops? XD
Dragonzflyte chapter 3 . 5/26/2010
Harry has turned on the evilness. Do you think he's trying to make the others hate him? Or is it a natural defence mechanism?

I like the storyline so far, it really works. The bits and pieces go well together.

I am worried about whether you are continuing this or not though. The last update was two years ago after all. I love the story but would hate to get my hopes up only to have them painfully crushed. You may think this is a exaggeration but you would be wrong. It'd be easier to understand if you thought back to story you found- on the cusp of a major plot development- where the author suddenly decides to stop. It truly is crushing. I do, however, understand if life got in your way and whatnot though. I would just be extremely disapointed is all.
Nobody'sNobody chapter 3 . 2/28/2010
I love how you portrayed Harry, and how their witty conversations are indeed witty.
BlackRose-FlowerofDeath chapter 3 . 1/4/2010
Very interesting! Can't wait to see what happens next!

tophats-R-us chapter 3 . 11/3/2009
Omfg! And a new fuckin chapter already!
Dark Neko 4000 chapter 3 . 10/20/2009
what going to happen next
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