|Reviews for It's Valentines Day!|
| Acting-Singing-Bella chapter 1 . 2/2/2008
that was actually adorable!
I loved it!
so sweet and romantic!
keep it up hunn you got talent :)
| MyShipIsUnbroken chapter 1 . 3/22/2007
that was so sweet *gushin it out* how romantic was the end cause from my point of view it was
| Heart of a Dreamer chapter 1 . 3/18/2007
Nice story Love the part where she beats the crap out of speedy and Robin I love That LOL Keep wrighting Becose you are great.
| kAthleen chapter 1 . 2/23/2007
I LOVED IT!I DON"T CARE IF SOME PEOPLE SAY IT WAS MUSHY!IT WAS REALLY SWEET AND NICE!I LOVE THAT SORT OF ENDINGS!THANKS SO MUCH!
| macsauce32 chapter 1 . 2/18/2007
Lots of drama, but really good.
| Cyansilent chapter 1 . 2/17/2007
(THIS IS NOT A FLAME.)
I think your english is not so good so i would encourage u to brush up on it and stuff.. Or get a beta if your english is not good. In case u dunno wad is beta.. its someone who helps you to correct your english mistakes or wadeva in ur fic..
I would be willing to help you if u wan.. xD
| I Laugh at ur Pain chapter 1 . 2/15/2007
ok... so you asked me to check out your stories and i'm starting with this one. this is not a flame, more like constructive critizisome. (I can't spell for beans) \
i don't know if there is something wrong with your computer, but the sentences should go all the way to the end of the page. Also you used to "s wrong.
"Because if I truly didn't like or love you I wouldn't do this(he grabbed her face and gently kissed her(yaa))" - that is what you put.
Now this is what it should look like:
"Beacuse if I truly didn't like or love you I wouldn't do this," Robin said before he grabbed her face and gently kissed her. (yaa)
Other than the wrong use of "s it wasn't a bad story. I would say to read other stories and learn from the way the author writes.
I hope this helps you out.
~The one and ONLY, I Laugh at ur Pain