Reviews for Monster
Pineapple Angel 14 chapter 2 . 8/4
Nooooooooo! But..but... It can't end that waayyyy! Nooo! Lol it's fine! That was a great story!
Guest chapter 2 . 3/24
Make another chapter please
Guest chapter 2 . 12/7/2014
Will there be more? I always love watching Johnny be tortured. I even wrote a couple of those myself.
AngaSong13 chapter 1 . 6/26/2014
UPDATE THIS FREAKING STORY! I DONT CARE HOW LONG ITS BEEN! UPDATE IT UPDATE IT UPDATE IT UPDATE IT UPDATE IT UPDATE IT UPDATE IT UPDATE IT UPDATE IT

Sorry for my rant but you CANNOT leave us hanging! PLEEEEEEEAAAAASSEEEEEE! I'm dying here! Pleaseeee update it! Pwwweeeeeaaasseeee
Someone chapter 2 . 7/15/2013
YOU. PLEASE FINISH THIS. IT'S BEAUTIFUL, AND YOU CAN'T JUST STOP AT A CLIFFHANGER. THAT'S JUST COLD. XD
Thephoenix1996 chapter 2 . 6/29/2013
Don't leave it at that! Please update soon.
should'veupdated chapter 2 . 5/19/2013
don't just leave a good fanfic on a cliffie for 6 years! you should've said in an author's nte or something that you were done! for fuck's sake! my apologies if the author has like died or something! that's an acceptable excuse not to update! but if not then omfg you're just an asshole! :D great story though! you're a good writer! (see I can be nice! I'm just realy pissed off because I wanted a 3rd chapter... -_-) I FUCKING HATE CLIFFHANGERS! :) xxx
Tycoon228 chapter 2 . 1/28/2013
I love that song to Imogen Heap is awesome
fangirl29 chapter 1 . 5/3/2012
Hey! This whole Avengers movie coming out had me checking out Captain America, which then took me back to Johnny Storm. I do love me a hurt Johnny-as long as he's put back together again as perfectly as he was to begin with. Love the angst!
Goulde chapter 2 . 11/2/2011
Love it so far. Hope you will update soon !
BlackxValentine chapter 1 . 5/4/2011
Why is it always the amazing stories that have to be abandoned.
CanclingAcount chapter 2 . 1/15/2011
So, is it safe to assume this story is dead? It's a shame, I like it a lot.
super ario chapter 2 . 7/5/2010
ASDFGHJKL.

Holy shit.

Okay, it's been like, what, three years since this has been touched? That's a long time. Quite a long time. I know how hard it is to get into a fanfiction after being away for so long, but seriously...how do you sleep at night? You cannot seriously plan on never working with this again, right? This is so well-written, so in character, I don't know...I really like the idea.

I know Ben didn't mean anything, but he'd waited for that a long time, and he just forgot he's like hella strong. My God, you have to update this, please. Seriously. Please.
Sparkiebunny chapter 2 . 6/16/2010
This fic is AMAZING! PLEASE UPDATE! :D
Raven Morning chapter 2 . 10/14/2009
it's a shame you haven't continued the story.

it was a really interesting premise.

I never thought of what would happen if Ben just snapped and lost control for only a moment.

Thought I did feel kinda bad when Ben backhanded Johnny and I laughed. lol XD

all in all, it's emotional, interesting, and I wish it hadn't ended! but thanks for the good read anyway. c:
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