Reviews for Despair
EnamoradaConDios chapter 1 . 2/19/2007
C'est un poème assez foncé! I can relate... Oh, the things I have written in various French classes... .

Sorry, this isn't a very good review so far in terms of constructive criticism. Anyway, although it's pretty dark, it's the truth just the same; those who do not accept the Savior will end up wishing they had. One thing I did notice, though, is that you used "whom" when you should have used "who" in the line "those whom have broken". Sorry, grammar Nazi here... Anyway, happy writing!