|Reviews for Stuck with you|
| Perentie Fan chapter 1 . 2/20/2007
This may be only a start for your story but its quite confusing and short. I would recommend you explain just what kind of story you're trying to write. I mean there is no disclaimer, no notes or anything. The switching to first and then second person seemed rather awkward as well. The setting is also unclear, what is the relationship of these different people in the first paragraph? Do they live together? And if so why?
Plus you have a Takya but he seems not to be the Takeya of DearS, and to top it off you have nothing in the story to suggest it is related at all to the DearS manga or anime.