Reviews for Revenge of the Fox
ChickenNuggetRobber chapter 23 . 8/28/2013
Aha, I'm glad that this story is different and didn't exactly follow the plot. Basically I'm glad that Konoha was defeated and most of it ruined.

Also, wonderful story so far, I'm loving it!
Agato Wesker - The Black Fox chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
Well no wonder, your a pussy yourself. Actually agreeing with that load of horseshit Kishimoto cooked up, wonder what it's like having your head up your ass like that.
Agato Wesker - The Black Fox chapter 13 . 8/11/2013
Crying? Tough my ass you made him into a giant pussy.
scotty26 chapter 11 . 6/28/2013
roflmao you just had to insert a star wars reference in there didn't you? nevertheless good story. First time I've ever come across a dark naruto story where orochimaru was his sensei thought.
Clandon chapter 2 . 6/28/2013
Contrived plot,flat dialogue,minor spelling and grammar errors. The idea of the plot sound great but execution of said plot falls flat with the bad writing.
SuperMaster650 chapter 15 . 5/29/2013
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FollieOfMadness chapter 20 . 5/4/2013
Wow...just wow. A fight between an 'unknown' and Naruto, played to beat of 'Not One of Us' from the Lion King 2. *moderately paced clap* I don't know whether to be impressed with the originality or be sarcastic, so I'll settle for half of each.

You really did a great many things with this chapter; the fight scene was, whilst I admit lacklustre, was still awesome for all that was stemmed from it. Truly, it was great. I think you managed one of those legendarily good battle scenes; ones which have an extreme emotional pull to them, but are also good to read/watch plus edge of seat worthy. Truly, you didn't dun goofed.
FollieOfMadness chapter 18 . 5/4/2013
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So when did Naruto all of a sudden become Alu-fucking-card? XD Dude, the references! My eyes and my fanboy mind are dying inside! XD

Side note:
Damn Naruto, u scary. (Again)
FollieOfMadness chapter 16 . 5/4/2013
Damn Naruto, u scary.
FollieOfMadness chapter 4 . 5/3/2013
"Said Sakon with a grin as Ukon went back inside him."

O.O DUDE! TELL PEOPLE BEFORE YOU HAVE KIND OF GRAPHIC STUFF! EW! EW! EW! I REJECT THE YAOI!
FollieOfMadness chapter 3 . 5/3/2013
So, effectively, you turned Naruto, the standard Main Protagonist of most stories into the standard Main Protagonist from most stealth games...credit where credit is due I suppose. :P

Side note:
"SCREW ALREADY!" - Me, the second Tayuya and Naruto first argued like some kind of old married couple.
Keiren-Kun89 chapter 1 . 4/22/2013
Im sorry, orochimaru is way ooc. He does not have a shred of morality left. If anything this whole thing should be a ruse. But having the sandaime watch through his crystal ball instead of coming to Naruto's rescue himself, not that a "mob" would form ugh.

You should I think had him be like canon, where naruto is ignored to the point of depression and have Orochimaru trick him with his silver tongue.
Shinnypichu88 chapter 6 . 4/12/2013
then you find out that the eight tails is an ox octopus thing
DarkNamikaze chapter 1 . 4/6/2013
love it
Cobek Arabellum chapter 18 . 3/22/2013
I hate every one making his curse seal level two that of a kitsune qhy not a dragon or a random monster like sakon and ukon!? Good chapter other wise.
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