Reviews for honestly it hurts
Charlene Bates chapter 1 . 1/4/2008
*eyes tear up* Yep... totally! I never have really had anyone love me (in a romantic sense), but I know it's something amazing. I know because I love someone, but he... yeah I think you can fill in the blank. I think the songs "Love Stinks" and "Love is like Oxygen" along with this poem say it all! Great poem! Lovely, sad, and so true. I commend you!
eureka chapter 1 . 2/27/2007
this is quite good

might want to make more of an effort to make the punctuation actually grammatically correct ie. get rid of the 87982734 question marks.

the content and words are really good but it's not actually written very poetically, it could easily be prose.