Reviews for Mary Sue and the Wardrobe
Blairx6661 chapter 1 . 4/27/2012
This was funny, I liked it :)

xxx
Crazy Dyslexic Nerd chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
And of course Mary Sue has just proved how very foolish she is. I knew Sues had no sense! Great story.

-Dyslexic Nerd
Shizuku Tsukishima749 chapter 1 . 10/29/2009
lol. I like how you added in Lewis's wardrobe admonish at the end! XD

This was really funny! I HATE Mary Sues and LOVE stories that (consequently) make fun of them, so I specifically searched for MS-related stories, and this is what I found! U

I LOVED that they didn't hear and that she didn't mind being forceful or 'adding to the scene'! XD It seems completely sweet because she's really not SUPPOSED to be there at all and honestly is just bringing the story WAY down to nothing! XD

Rock on! This was hysterical! U *U*

Ever-so sincerely signed,

Shizuku Tsukishima749 :D ;D :) ;)
LastChancetoBreathe chapter 1 . 1/24/2009
Haha! That...was...awesome! :) You made me giggle. I loved these lines:

“OW! You idiot, you stepped on my foot!” This was not true, of course, but it added to the feeling of the scene.

She could feel the cold, smell the snow, almost touch the branches...

WHAM! She smacked hard into the back of the wardrobe.

Haha, priceless. :)

And this:

"And Mary Sue Smith was never heard of again, because, as everyone knows it is very foolish to shut one’s self in a wardrobe."

I loved how you incorporated the book into it. Great job. :)
rainpaint chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
LOL, I really didn't expect the ending. A wonderful way to use that line - I loved that in the book.
Meltintalle chapter 1 . 9/6/2008
A very entertaining bit of work, but it was the last line that really tied it all together and finished it off with a bang.
Trinity Day chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
The entire thing was fun, but I especially like that last line, reminding us of the foolishness of shutting oneself in a wardrobe.
JealousOfTheMoon chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
“I am Mary Sue Smith! I belong in Narnia! Peter’s my true love! HELP!”

Loved that one. D

I think this is one of my favorite stories...ever. You posted it around the time when I was having Canon Keeper/HTKANMS ideas stirring, and I think it really was the fire to the fuse on those things. So I always read it with a large measure of fondness...that and the fact that I like anything that makes me laugh so heartily.

Spot on!

God bless...
dying from laughter chapter 1 . 4/30/2008
ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha. That is one of the funniest things i've read in a while!
Peace Like a River chapter 1 . 12/28/2007
Ha ha, loved the last line. :-) C.S. Lewis would be proud of you for pointing that out, lol.
asdfjkl chapter 1 . 10/28/2007
haha. i loved it. the last line though, is the best. well done!
lightsabermaster chapter 1 . 8/23/2007
Haha! Very funny! It's nice to see the Mary Sues get what's coming to them. ;) Well done!

-LM
Val Evenstar chapter 1 . 8/16/2007
The ending is absolutely perfect. I love it!
save the pandas chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
AHAHAHAHAH that was really extreamly very funny!
Chelse chapter 1 . 7/2/2007
Aww... poor Mary Sue, but it WAS a good story.
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