Reviews for Atashi no Subete
aegyosonyu chapter 1 . 12/4/2011
This was cute but you misused the word "atashi" for the title... It's supposed to be "watashi" because "atashi" refers to a girl not a boy... Maora and Maguri are boys even if Maora looks and dresses like a girl...
colombiansoccerchick chapter 1 . 4/16/2008
I hate yaoi...but I like this pairing...idk, maybe its becaure Maora is a cross dresser so he at least looks like a girl...idk...well, still good job!
sana-chan9 chapter 1 . 3/9/2008


Azul Luna chapter 1 . 2/22/2008
Yay, Maora and Maguri are togther! I don't really like yaoi, but this pairing is too cute!
Cumcakesxxxx chapter 1 . 2/8/2008
Aw! That was just to adorable! -

Really really suer sweet!

Poor Maora... Maguri is such a jerk.

That was realy cute!

But I still wonder why Maguri said "Shizumasa" when he really loved Maora?
AccountNoLongerActivePleaseDel chapter 1 . 2/6/2008
this is so cute! I love how you portray Mao-chan's feelings, it's really good. You kept them both in character and it went straight to the point. Short, but sweet, good job!
ChibiItachi-chan chapter 1 . 10/21/2007
eek! / yay for yaoi - this is going in my favs
Era Fey chapter 1 . 10/20/2007
I REALLY LIKE THE STORY but there is one part I dont get it, if he likes Maora then why say Shizu? 0_0

But in general I like it.
cajun-beauty chapter 1 . 9/14/2007
Awn, that was so cute! I'm glad Maguri managed to convince him tho.
Ayumi-Reina chapter 1 . 7/25/2007
Aw! Kwaa! This is so sweet! I love it. This is my fave couple,
NeverEverStar chapter 1 . 3/12/2007
Kyah! THat was so cute! Adorable! It's such a cute couple. And don't be discouraged by the lack of reviews, Shinshi Doumei Cross doesn't seem as popular as Arina-sensei's other works. (I can't fathom why not...) 'Tis a most adorable ficlett!