Reviews for Summer Proposals
Guest chapter 1 . 7/27
Nicely done this Drabble is amazing. You end d it in exactly the right spot!
Elle chapter 1 . 12/23/2014
Aww, they lived happilly ever after:)
Guest chapter 1 . 8/8/2014
The last paragraph is nonsense, Erika Potter is NON-EXISTENT
100-percent-Harry-Potter-obsessed chapter 1 . 2/17/2007
You had me until the last paragraph. If this is the way that you wanted your story to turn, then more detail and a small note of AU would be nice.

~100-percent-HP-obsessed
x-FuzzleMONSTER chapter 1 . 2/17/2007
I guess I liked it until the last paragraph.

"I guess you could say that the lived happily ever after, with lots of babies and even more pranks."

*They realy only had one. Nor, did Lily like pranks. Id think that Lily would make James stop the pranking. However, thats just me..*

"with their two children, Harry and Erika Potter."

*Again, they only had one: Harry James Potter.*

"Both children have inherited the devilish nature of their father and are the top pranksters at Hogwarts."

*I wouldnt really say Harry was a prankster.. Not one bit.*

But, it is your story.. So, I guess if thats what you want to do to it... -shrug-