Reviews for The Ground Below, The Sky Above
Umbrasword chapter 1 . 12/27/2009
It was really good! I can't blame you for its length, as I write short stuff too.

Even though it was just a little something, may I suggest next time, go into a little more detail about exactly what happened?

For example, what exactly happened? A building came down, was it a mission? Or the institute? And where is he now, when he's about to jump?

On a great note, Scott and Logan are very much in character, and I applaud you! Logan's a seemingly simple character, but very hard to stay in his character.

The end is so sweet too...

Now that my writer's review is done, I must fangirl now, as you've written about my favorite couple.


OMFG I LOVE YOU SO MUCH NOW! *huggle glomp* I LOVE these guys!
Geek Squared 1307 chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
This is so sweet and sad. I love the pairing. Good job!

Patricia16 chapter 1 . 9/11/2007
cries for Logan and Scott