Reviews for Snow And Coal
harley944 chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
poor hinata
LM3795 chapter 2 . 7/11/2008
This story intriguied me to no end...I'm usually a Gaara/Hinata fan...but something about this fic has me anxious to see more...I hope you are able to update soon!
xXxjustagrlxXx chapter 2 . 7/10/2008
it's okay as long as you update as soon as possible because im really interested in your story.
bookworm007 chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
this is really good, a great first chapter. i like that hinata is more confident and open, and it'll be interesting to see how she got like that. the scene at the hyuuga mansion suggests thtere's a good backstory there, same with sasuke and hinatas relationship. ahh, i can't wait to read more.
sshhhhhhhhh chapter 1 . 12/11/2007
WHY OH WHY havent you continued with this...its good...it could be great if you continue ;)
don't resist chapter 1 . 9/18/2007
Geebus! this is going to be good... I can just tell. I'm really glad I founded you and read this. It makes me all gibberish inside. Whoot! I can't wait for the next chapter!

With Love,

Hotari-chan
Didi74 chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
Why didn't you continue this one ? It sounds interresting and an angry (and credible hinata) is not common ? lol
disneyrulz23 chapter 1 . 6/29/2007
plz continue and also you made a mistake for houshi it hiashi well just to tell you but anyway plz update
kenshinlover2002 chapter 1 . 3/6/2007
I like, it's good. Update soon.
HisaAngel chapter 1 . 2/21/2007
This is good. Please update soon. This is interesting really. Does Hanabi hate Hinata? That damn Hiashi! _ Oh well, at least he regretted it. LUV IT! UPDATE KAY! _
AlwaysHiei chapter 1 . 2/21/2007
I definitely like it so far. _ I do hope you update! Sasuke and Hinata have an interesting relationship so far. And Hinata's definitely changed- she has more of a backbone. _ Nicely written so far, and do update soon!
KamikazeUdon chapter 1 . 2/18/2007
a good start. characterization is slightly off, i think. update.
Kouketsu-chan chapter 1 . 2/17/2007
yay! you deserve a gold star! I really like how Hinata is in this.. not OOC, but more mature.
Arethusa Fellini chapter 1 . 2/17/2007
It's a rather cliché plot but that _is_ the limitation of Naruto fanfiction. Anyway, it _is_ a refreshing change to see a bothered Hinata with a mysterious Sasuke. Hints say otherwise, that Hinata is just dense with Sasuke's er... feelings. It's quite adorable so do continue.

I like the conversations, they all flow smoothly.

I noticed there isn't a uniform tense that was used around the fiction. Sometimes it's in present tense (looks, locks), sometimes it's in past (sighed, grinned).

Some more nit-picking would be: Houshi should be Hiashi. Hault should be halt (means stop). Pinkette... *sweatdrops*

Cheers!
Prodigy Keyblade Wielder chapter 1 . 2/17/2007
Hm, I think this story is pretty good so far, but the story lacks on details about Hinata. I'm also sorry to say this, but if you're only writing a story for reviews, it's not really satisfing for anybody. I don't plan to preach to you about this, but if you want reviews, you're going to have to earn them, not demand them.
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